rate_review Reviews

This stroy is great so far. I am enjoying every minute I spend reading it. I love the plot and everything. You are a very great writer and your art is very nice too.

loved the story please update soon cause i wanna read what happens next

man, I love your story!!! The grammar may be problematic, but that is not all that important. Your plot is just simply fascinating. Supporting you, please write more. I am really curious what exactly is Leon, is he going to be even powerful than Tet chan, hahahahahaha.

Pish. Don't be upset. Most of these people who reviewed don't even know enough grammar to capitalize certain words and use proper punctuation. Worse yet, it seems that they can't tell the difference between the "your" and "you're" most of the time. Your fic, grammatically, is one of the better ones I've seen. Keep it up.

P.S. English is my second language too. I've been speaking it for six years, but I still make mistakes.

yeah you rock don't take any of that flame shit tey are jst pissed that you write great fics i love this one peace!

Hello.
I can understand why you got so mad there is not much fun in working your butt of at something and then being told this sucks. I mean why comment if you have nothing positive to say?

anyway, your story is great. It is so rare to see this pairing and quite frankly it makes me laugh every time I think of Leons reaction when he hears that he is "married" to Tet-chan. Man is he going to shout:=)Now you also have me wondering about his father. Nice touch, it ads more exitment into the story and makes Leon a more likely mate to tet-chan^^

As for the spelling I do find it a little annoying when it is of, but if your beta is away I also think it is quite understandeble nothing is harder than to find your own spelling mistakes.

So please don´t stop posting, despite mean and narrowminded people.

This was lovely! I am thoroughly enjoying it very much. Please ignore the people who are being mean about your English.

Love the story, hoping to see more bed scenes though, teeheee!!

ok, looking though the psoh and found your story. looked intresting so i read.....I LIKE! when does the next chapter come out?

Hello,

the story is coming along great can't wait for the next chapter.