rate_review Reviews

You need to update! I'm loving this story! ^ ^

I'll confess to being a little confused. You have Yohji and Omi in the Side B timeline with the other characters, but Yohji seems to have his memories, and they're calling Omi by "Omi" instead of "Mamoru", which is what he goes by at this time.

You also mention the possibility of bringing in Manx and Birman, who are both dead by Side B, and Persia, who is, in fact, Omi...who is already in your story. So I'm kind of curious where you're getting your Side B information from...

Also, you don't establish setting or anything, so I had a hard time getting a feel to whether or not they were in England or back in Japan (at least from the first chapter). I *love* Side B fic, but I'm afraid I'm too confused to give you any sort of positive or helpful review. Sorry.

Wow, you've totally got me hooked! I've never read a Side B fiction before so it's lovely to finally get to know Free, Chloe, Michel and Yuki. You sure know how to write a funny fic too... My highest praise!