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for Ardent

by Voluptas

person :->
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story but I wished you had continued with the last szene of chapter 3! I'm curious about what'll happen next (I mean, I can imagine what'll happen next, but it's better reading it instead of thinking about it :->). So plaeees update soon!
person julian
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome! update, update, update, updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate!
plz, plz, plz... (bouncing off the walls)PLZ(collapses from exostion)zzzzzzz
person MissMurder111
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! i like it! please update soon!
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"There was a knock and the door opened. Muraki entered, dressed entirely in silver white."

Hahaha. The first thing I thought when I read this was, "Muraki is the bride!"

Interesting story. Keep it up ^^
person eternal
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update ^-^ This chapter is quite short BUT nice one btw when will our hero come and save the cute little Hisoka KYAAA Sorry looks like i'm eager to read the next chappie! Thanks
person Jeri
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanna read more!!!! Love it!!!
person DreamPrincess
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I loved it...And don't worry, I'm the sameway as you...I like him being 15....Add more....
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love it! I wanna read more!!
person eternal
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great story. Attracted by the summary and decided to take a shot. You made a great opening chapter there. LOVES it. Since i'm not a writer so can't give you much an advice to it but I really likes the opening chapter. I'm really looking forward to continue this story adn PLEASE DON'T IT! I'll wait for you next chap! ^-^
person eternal
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great story. Attracted by the summary and decided to take a shot. You made a great opening chapter there. LOVES it. Since i'm not a writer so can't give you much an advice to it but I really likes the opening chapter. I'm really looking forward to continue this story and PLEASE CONTINUE THIS TIL THE END! I'll wait for you next chap! ^-^

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