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December 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and was wondering if you could do a fanfic. for me? it involoes tentacles and Mimi from digimon. If you will send me a email.
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey man, I am a perverted fan of your stories (please do not take this the wrong way)
I have read mst of your stories, and i havent found one that I hated yet. Take this reveiw as you may, and please keep writing.
I know how it is to write with personal issues in the way. Trust me man, take as long as you need to. Just dont quit writing.
I have read mst of your stories, and i havent found one that I hated yet. Take this reveiw as you may, and please keep writing.
I know how it is to write with personal issues in the way. Trust me man, take as long as you need to. Just dont quit writing.
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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.o
most interesting.
most interesting.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It took seven months for this chapter to come out, and I feel it was worth the wait. I loved the explaination of Nagei and Mewfinity. It was a very sad chapter, and I felt bad for all the good characters.
On the downside, you really shouldn't inject author's notes in the middle of the text. That sort of thing belongs at the end of the chapter. As for Hentai's death, I think it would have been better if you just mentioned that Mewfinity killed him and that she decided not to disturb Nagei by sparing her the horrid details. Don't apologise that his death wasn't shown; that takes readers out of the story.
It may sound like I listed more bad points than good points, so I want to say here that I really loved the chapter and I think it's one of the best. I really look forward to seeing more in the future. I hope all your personal problems get solved too.
On the downside, you really shouldn't inject author's notes in the middle of the text. That sort of thing belongs at the end of the chapter. As for Hentai's death, I think it would have been better if you just mentioned that Mewfinity killed him and that she decided not to disturb Nagei by sparing her the horrid details. Don't apologise that his death wasn't shown; that takes readers out of the story.
It may sound like I listed more bad points than good points, so I want to say here that I really loved the chapter and I think it's one of the best. I really look forward to seeing more in the future. I hope all your personal problems get solved too.
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're here. I can continue reading your fantastic story on this site now. I eagerly await what happens next.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Any particular reason why she can't finish her evolution cycle to become a Dragonite hybrid?
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh, I hate to break this to you, but quicksand doesn't actually work like that. The Mythbusters, Adam Savage and Jamie Hyneman, tested it out, and the end all result was that in fact when you get to your waste you just sort of bob there - Killer Quicksand Myth:BUSTED! Otherwise, nice story so far. Laters.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well DJ Lucky Duck,
Nagei is still good as she is still being friendly with May.
But there is something else to it too.
TBone Tony
Nagei is still good as she is still being friendly with May.
But there is something else to it too.
TBone Tony
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
most excellent. the plot thickens.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww 2 bad...i think it wouldve been nicer if nagei really had been good...it wouldve been sweet, misty and may couldve shown her what love and kindness 2 pokemon are...looks like shes gonna be a villain tho...typical