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June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please continue i wanna know whats next o.o
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, i got your review about the fact that my story was similar to yours, and i'm sorry. i had never read this until just now, and it's really good, but they are only really similar in the fact that there is a sex card. so, sorry, but they aren't that similar, and i swear i was in no way copying you. Promise! ^^
-LemonLover-
-LemonLover-
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August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story and plot but I dont think its possible for a girl to cum that many times in one setting. I added you to my faves and I can't wait for moew of the story! Great job!
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December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic I can't believe ur gonna end it
I think u have a great idea and I really wish u would write more!!!!!
I hope u update its a great plot!
Xoxo
I think u have a great idea and I really wish u would write more!!!!!
I hope u update its a great plot!
Xoxo
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November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm gonna come right out and say this... I didn't like it. There's no satisfaction to it. No build. Even if it was from the magic of the cards, she was just, as you put it, "organisming" constantly. Where's the fun in that? Touya just came out of no where and banged her? No build to that, no thought process. Your actual sex scenes (which one would think would be the focus of this sort of fic) were surprisingly vague, yet filthy.
And it's ORGASM. Unless there's some sort of creature growing in her (hey, that's a whole different story) it's orgasm.
And it's ORGASM. Unless there's some sort of creature growing in her (hey, that's a whole different story) it's orgasm.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. A little like this CCS doujin I read somewhere before. Would love to have seen how you would write the bit where Yue "confronts" Sakura about abusing her powers. ;)
Actually I thought Mizuki AKA the NASTY PAEDOPHILLIC teacher would've gotten to Touya first, the nasty pedo bitch.
Actually I thought Mizuki AKA the NASTY PAEDOPHILLIC teacher would've gotten to Touya first, the nasty pedo bitch.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BTW, you misspelled orgasm as "organism" several times. Might wanna do something about that.
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O your quiting! Oh but it wasnt that bad! It was really good, but if that's what you choose, you're the author after all.