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March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. The angsty Hakkai and Gojyo stories are so much better than the happy lovey-dovey ones. I really hope you continue this.
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's good! More!!!
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your story, can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon(this waiting is *killing* me!)^_^
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good~! X3 More! More! Yey Hakkai angst! Just make sure you don't get too melodramatic. :)
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September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!! Great plot and I dying to find out what happens next.
Keep up the great work!
Keep up the great work!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is a good story with potential and an interesting plot. I would like to read what happens next.
However, it is littered with mistakes. You must take more care with writing. You appear to be speak-writing where you just write what you 'speak' in your head, this makes it look am amateurish and detracts from a good plot. Read through your work and take care with your word choices as well as brush up on your homophones. Please make this effort if you can.
However, it is littered with mistakes. You must take more care with writing. You appear to be speak-writing where you just write what you 'speak' in your head, this makes it look am amateurish and detracts from a good plot. Read through your work and take care with your word choices as well as brush up on your homophones. Please make this effort if you can.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooo, this is a good story
I can't wait for the next chapter!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, have you just given up or did you update this somewhere else? If you have: Link! Here! Now! XD I really like this story so YO! Where's ma' update? :P
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am now reviewing to let you know that I'd love to see chapter three and any chapters following. This is something a little different, and I would like very much to see how it turnes out. ^^
*^Blood, Rain, & Roses^*
VampiregirlED
*^Blood, Rain, & Roses^*
VampiregirlED
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August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SWEEEETTTT!!! So, um, gojyo/hakkai is my FAVORITE pairing. And a little bit of angst never hurt, right? ^.~