rate_review Reviews

Horrible ending. Hilariously tragic, but horrible.

Great story! Original and very well written.

Awesome story. I've always loved our stories, whether they were on AFF or just FF. They are well thought out, engaging reads. They make me think about the different possibilities for endings of stories.
This one was definitely as different as it can get. Keep up the great work.

I've read this story many times, and I couldn't not leave a review after this latest read. This is such a chilling story, it gives me goosebumps just reading it. This is certainly an intriguing twist on your standard Love Hina fic and you should try writing another story like it. Excellent work, you're one of my favorite authors on this site, and I hope you've got more works planned for the future. :]

That's one hot story! The whole incident with Motoko was just awesome!

I couldn't stop reading this, and am now thoroughly disturbed. Well written, but not the kinda thing you wanna read at 3 am.

Wow...just wow...Keitaro did not deserve such an ending as that, but I'll admit, that was some DAMN good writing. =3 Some of the reactions seemed to be a bit radical, but it was rather interesting overall.

I couldn't say that the wasn't good; in its own right, it is. Just not what I was expecting at all. Well....after reading a little more into the chapters, I figured something like that was going to happen. But not what I was initially hoping for. xD

This story left me with a bunch of mixed feelings. I should take note on this and think about a few things in my life. Definitely gave me something to think on...

-Narshe "Dizzy Gear" Delvar-

My god, that's horrible. You, my friend, are evil. Pure and simple. But it's a damn good story regardless.

one of my favorite love hina stories

awww.... I was hoping he'd fuck motoko again..... lol, nice story I guess... it's not bad whatever it is.