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by hawker748

person Fallen Seraph
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was cruel to keitaro. and to think that he went psycho after having a few girls. you make crazy but great fics.
person Fenrir
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...thats the only words that i can think of when you write your stories. I have read every single one....twice...okay Loss and redemtion I read about 3 times before I read the sequal which still think you should finish. It's great...I LOVE IT! OMG...man...you got some skills when it comes to love hina. I especially love it when you do Keitaro and Motoko pairings, they're my favorite. Keep it up...Love them....out-freking-standing. Love and Peace yo.
person Wouldn't you like ta know?
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh.. my.. god..
this.. this was really good.. extremely well written..
but.. the ending just freaked me out..
*shudder*
well.. for some reason that wasn't really that much surprising..
good luck on future fics/lemons..
person Andrew J. Talon
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God, that's just... Twisted. (shudder) Was that Yuki's plan from the start? Oi... Good work, but it's incredibly twisted.
person Shadowknight
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again with the setting of higher standards. A journey into the dark side of sexuality that spun out of control. Excellent work!
person Cam
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the hottest story on this freaking site. I kid you not.
person Archimedeas
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still awesome. So, so awesome.

One thing though. I hope this isn't too much to ask but please, for the love of God, don't make Keitaro a fucking rapist snuff aficionado. I mean a little bit of that is okay, this last chapter kicks ass and so did the chapter with Motoko. But let me tell you, if you write a chapter where the guy rapes and batters Su or something while she cries and protests, I am giving up fan-fiction as a whole. Then again, you haven't let me down yet so I doubt you'd end up going in that direction.

Keep up the good work.
person burger
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my....
if i was keitaro i'd be so confused.
person Emperor Jaden
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just...Wow. Amazing work you got her, it's really good. Please Write more, and if Motoko doesn't kill/neuter him, I would like Naru or Shinobu next please. Naru because she's had it coming to her, and it just seems that the way she treat him would trigger his insanity. and Shinobu? I think Keitaro would just go insane and fuck her next.
person The Cat
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God yes, nice one. How about having him fuck Shinobu next, see how she matches up to her mother? Shinobu would do anything for him... Or maybe he should have them both at once...

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