rate_review Reviews

You sir are the greatest Love Hina fanfiction writer that ever lived. For the love of God, continue this story. Include the girls, I don't know. This story was just so...Fucking awesome in a way I can't put my finger on. I didn't even whack off to the smut or anything, I mean I'm reading it and I realize that this is truly a well-written story with provocative subject matter instead of the usual plotless, mindless bullshit that gets put up here. I never thought I'd present this compliment to a fanfic author, but this story is really Bukowski-an. The shower thing where he's having a nervous breakdown is maybe a little excessive, but now that I think about it maybe not. I just hope it doesn't turn him into a fucking rapist or something for the rest of the story like so many Love Hina writers are fond of writing.

Anyway, I really hope you continue writing this story. And maybe get a little lighter with it, but not too much. Hang on to that grit, you know, it's real. It's there. Real good story, Hawk. Keep it up.