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by merlose

schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting and was great based on episode 16. I think you captured the characters really well and just as a side note, I think Re-l was actually being so cranky and stuff towards Vincent because she was afraid to feel anything but cool resignation towards him. Kind of like a defensive mechanism she wasn't aware she was putting up.
person Safir84
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this fic was so good, I loved it, too bad you didn't write more on it though, cos I'd have loved to read more on this awesome fic of yours! I really liked how you portrayed the characters, it was very true to the show, I believe! You did a very good job, thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
person Persephone of Abydos
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally, an Ergo Proxy fic! I think you captured their personalities pretty well in this one, too. Please write more!
person ankobun
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love ergo proxy! Next fic you write should be based off episode 20. Ergo/Vincent/Real
person bansheeblue13
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ergo Proxy fanfiction!? What!? and lime a at that!

This story makes me so happy!
person bansheeblue13
schedule August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I wasn't really expecting an ending like that.
Could the next story be a lemon?
person ^_^
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE THIS FIC!

and i totally half thought about the possibility of proxy punishin real on behalf of vincent for her cruelty.

but i kinda like vincint/real as a couple though...oi really do...i think they'd be cute together ^^;;;;;

maybe real can learn to be a lil nicer.....
person dicki
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I'm glad that u finished it! I've been checking here every few days to see if u've updated and was happy that u did ^_^.
I liked ur fic overrall-it blended very well with ep 16, which I hadn't watched before I read your part 1, but I subsequently watched, albeit raw coz i couldn't take the tension-so i had to see for myself ...hehe
More vincent x real fics please!! Next time, more vincent and not ergo proxy would be good^^, since I think EP really wants to kill her.

Good luck and keep going!!
Dicki
person ^_^
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOOOW~ AN ERGO PROXY FIC!! AND A VINCENT/REAL ONE AT THAT! GREAT! OH I CANT WAIT TILL U GET CHAPTER 2 CHURNED OUT!~!

yes real is a bitch..and yet for some reason i STILL like her. i guess she DOES have redeming aspects and i guess she's used to acting tough all the time. probably cuz she grew up in a messed up environment

WANT MORE FICCIE!
person dicki
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for writing an EP fic!!
Since this is the first fic on EP available here, I was excited to read it-good work on depicting the characters e.g. Real, Vincent's actions/thoughts are all very alike to the anime.
I can't wait to read more, perhaps make the chaps longer in the future?!

Keep going!! ^_^

Dicki

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