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Goodness! I hadn't even realized that I'd reached the end of this already! Mmm, I really do love this epic thing. I hope that we get to see some more of that deliciously wicked threesome soon, as well as the crazy, tantalizingly secret Sakuma-san (and all his kinks!).

Shortened version: Great work, as always! Can't wait for more!

Yah, for being able to read another chapt of this fantastic story ... tears ... to read that it will end soon. Am hoping you'll continue with more great stories about Eiri/Shu or even about Kyo and gang. This latest chapt was really solid .. I really like how you write the story about the same event but from each of their view points, giving us an insigh to their thoughts. The ending was also super hot! Can't wait to read the net chapt and see how things end for our favourite couple.

finally. i started this epic of life series days ago and i wasnt planning on reviewing until i was done, and now i am, but i had so much that i wanted to say about this story and the other three. but i'm going to cut it down a bit.

i really love your stories. i've been extremely impressed with them. they are well written and well thought of, and every single chapter is as enticing as the last.

that said, i hope you dont mind if i just express a few suggestions:

more Ryuichi! i love him, i need more Ryu. he's a facinating character in his own right, and i'm anxious to see how you completely portray him. you've touched on Ryu before, but not much, and i'd really love to read more. i'm also curious about Ryu and Tatsuha's relationship because i've been a shipper of those two since i started the gravitation series.

loving Tohma. i adore him, and i always have and always will. i think you've got him completely figured out, and at the same time, it's like he's become your own character. it's great. i'll be honest, i know they're married and all, but i've never been a big fan of Mika. i'm quite the fangirl, so i dont take to other female characters too well, but you've caused her to grow on me a bit. i like Mika in your story, but ordinarily, i cant stand her.

Kyo facinates me. in all honesty (forgive me for saying so) i battled with my feelings for Kyo, because at first i really hated him, then loved him, then back again. my feelings on him are still up in the air. i'm kinda digging the threesome, although i'm curious as to what that relationship might be like without Kyo. i've always been a big Hiro/Guru shipper. but . . . that said, it's amazing how you have added a new character and made it work. most people have a tendency to add someone new and it completely clashes with the series. not Kyo, so i'm impressed in that sense.

i had a lot more, but you're probably getting tired of reading all this babble, so i'll stop here. i cant wait for more and i'm really looking forward to where this series is going. keep it up, its amazing!

I DO NOT LIKE CLIFF HANGERS XDDDDDDDD


Can't wait for the next one ^^ I want to know what happens on thier 'date' and kinky-ness is awesome! Really well written chapter!

At the end of chapter 15 are you going to continue from that very moment or just continue the story?(Very important question)Hey, you got to give us kinko's a little of the story. lol Back to the chapter: it was very good but I had to go back and read the chapter before to find out why they were in the car to begin with and where they were. You might wnat to give just a short sentence to segway into the new chapters since it is takeing you a while to get them out. By the way, I said good let me recant and slip in GREAT because it really did show development of characters and expained a lot of the emotions that are swriling around. This chapter grounded the characters into the story nicely. Good work.

Another great chapter! I'm actually confused on the whole Chikara thing? Could you clear that up in commentary or something? That would be awesome ^^!


Anyways... the "Eiri's cooking accidents" made me smile XD Can't wait for the next one~

Hey! I especially liked the part where you put Tohma in a not so pretty spot. I'm still hoping that you write a one-shot off the trama in this story of Tohma & Shuichi together... I find the pairing a bit... well I guess the word would be stimulating. Would you please consider that?

On the other hand, I don't remember what chapter it was that I didn't like as I've been trying to find my thoughts of that particular day when I read that chapter by rereading your story... but I'm afraid I'm a little lost. So when I find my thoughts, I'll let you know. In the mean time... Carry on with the story... and please don't end it yet...

And... I also forgot to add that I would wish to know what happened with Eiri and his father's meeting.. did he set the old man straight or not?

Oh my gosh, I can't wait for the therapy part, will they blow up at each other again? Update soon!

Ooooh! This is good. I love how you write Tohma- maniacal and manipulative, but in his head so human and, for lack of a better phrase, well-intentioned about all of his machinations. And now my interest is so thoroughly captured by the discussion of Chikara- what could be the secret of a baby whose true birth had to be hidden from Shuichi and Tatsuha and would thoroughly upset Ryuichi? This could be the stuff of legends, almost to the point of destiny and the addoptive sons of kings out of Greek legend, it's so wonderfully complicated... or at least it would make for a wondefully explosive argument in the middle of a six month tour, the sort that has everybody mad at everybody else. Please, please, please continue writing this saga- I love it and as long as you continue to update, I will continue to read, with avid delight.

Simpley delisious.This has been the best story ever and is ending just right. Oh what a happy little reader am I.