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for Come What May

by Despina

person Blue-eyes-green
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was well worth the wait. It's 1:30 in the morning and I was up for a final at 8, so I'm to sleepy to be sure I'm spelling this right, but I must bow before you, oh wonderful one of all that is charecterization, description, dialogue and plot. I love this story. Thank you, and good night.
person bluesnake40
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chapt is great ... good work by your betas. Have been waiting for the next update and this was certainly worth the wait. I can totally see this development happening in their relationship and glad that both of them finally had their chance to speak. Can wait to see how things go from this point on. Hopefully, you have some hot scenes written ... I love how you are able to write such sizzling hot stuff. Keep the chapts coming!
person HentaiZaru
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Eiri CRIED!!!! It's a miracle! UPDAAAAAAAATE!
person Chikky
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another beautifully written chapter! I loved it and hope for a new one to come out soon again!
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm quite busy tonight but I intend to read this fic. I will say that I like how you named each chapter with songs. Gravitation is wonderful.
person Nicole
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it, can't wait for more!
person Kibou32
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really really liked this chapter... last chapter - as said before - I didn't really like it all that much. I especially liked the last sentence where Eiri said that it was time for some real groveling in order to fix things, that made me smile. Awaiting impatiently for your next installment...

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person HentaiZaru
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*GASP* What is Yuki going to say?! Please UPDATE!
person Chikky
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grrr... can't wait for the next one as usual!

I love this story to pieces. I like wait for the chapters like a child waiting for their show to come on XD
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
2 thoughts on songs you could use for this portion of the "Epic of Life":
"Waking Up Beside You" -- Stabbing Westward: One of my best angsty songs ever! If you've never heard it, I REALLY strongly suggest you listen, it hits home with this story so well.
"Show Me Love" -- Robyn: Oh, come one, we get a happy ending, right? I'll be so upset if I invest so much emotionally into this story and get no happy ending. They can still make it. Why continue on in life if one is not convinced that they get their happy ending and Prince Charming in the end?
Just check out those two songs, and see if they work, for you.
Keep up the fantastic story, and update soon please!

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