rate_review Reviews

I have to say first I love the story.

I do have a few thoughts. Nothing critical.

In real life, if you knew such abusive people you would very likely stay away from them as by this time you know they are helpless. You would shrug them off as "they like it or they would quite each other". The way you manage to keep them all together even after such horrors is very interesting and keeps me reading.

Now that Suichi has a "shit or get off the pot" attitude, I get the feel this is not going to have a happy ending. Really though, how can it possibly? They are so unhealthy for each other. But it makes a fabulas read,thier angst! ^_~

For me, it's all about the kiss and make up. I have the feeling this is going to be quite a sad ending, when you decide it's finally done.

Godd job!

Why do you do this to us? I wanna read more!!! Okay, I guess I'll wait for the next chapter. Good job on the chapter and really, REALLY, can't wait for the next one!!

I was delightfully surprised to see another update now. I had checked on the site yesterday and I thought that maybe you'd have updated today. I'm so happy! Your story is soooo good, I find myself reading it over and over again. Are you going to a Halloween special, if you are would you do it more of a erotic nature than scary? And... can I please ask you to write a one or two shots of a Tohma/Shuichi pairing with Eiri Yuki on the side? I'd be sooo happy if you did.

So... continue writing.

Att.
Kibou32

Arrgh! I want the rest of the story, and i want it now!
You hooked me waaay back when, and only now have I finally gotten off of my ass to tell you how much I adore this epic!
Please keep up the good work.
And update soon!

Wow... I continue to love this story so much (sorry for not reviewing until now, my school's server can be kind of nuts). I loved the Kyou chapter- he is very lucky, isn't he just. All during the last chapter while I watched Schu and Yuki getting cuter and cuter, while becoming more and more functional, I kept waiting for the shoe to drop. It was a perfect build up written with a wonderful sense of dramatic timing- it could be as cute as could be but never got sachrine sweet because we knew of the meeting with Tohma. Brilliant. This chapter was really great- you make Tohma far more sympathetic than usual, and I like him better this way than the usual Dark Lord personification- machiavellian and calculating but not heartless. He so perfectly detatched from everything in a way that makes him so personable.
I love your writing and can't wait to read more!~ Blue-eyes-green

Yes, another chapt ... yes!!!... was excited to see you've posted an update but how can you leave us hanging? What is Shuichi up to, will he have another attack that will land him in the hospital, go totally overboard??? what will happen next? Arrggg... pls, pls update quickly. OK, back to the review proper ... as usual your original characters are wonderful, very 3-D and real ... can imagine what a formidable woman Suguru's mum is just fr the reactions of Tohma & Kyosuke. The latter is really an adorable character whom I sure wld have made a great addition to the cannon itself! Also, nice to see that you're fleshing out Tohma and he's not just a manupulative chracter but does have a heart... his advice to Suichi was spot on. Great that he still has his sneaky and ever scheming side but I think this chapt shows that still waters really do run deep and he does have a caring side, and not just for Eiri. Thank you for this fic ... onward, your fans await!

Hey!! Am I so glad to see a new chapter today!! This is a bit of a compromise... as you have so kindly put up 2 chapters of the 3 I asked after chapter six. Hmm. So Tohma is human after all, huh? I mean, I haven't read the whole Gravitation Manga to actually understand Tohma... but I kind of liked the fact that you made him human. At least A bit. So... if you write any one-shots of Tohma/Shuichi pairing with an angry Eiri Yuki at one side, would you let me know? And... this is awfully forward of me for asking... but if you have any further volumes of Gravitation manga... do you think you could send them to me as scanlations? hehehe... very poor person right now.
This was great. Keep it up!!

I love this story so of course I will give good reviews! I would cry if this story was left the way it is right now... I'm so into it! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully Yuki and Shu figure out their problems soon!

This was another great chapt ... am a fan of Only the Ring Finger so was excited to read the cross over .. yes Yuichi/Wataru are such a great couple. Meanwhile, can't wait to see how Shuichi's meeting with Tohma will go and what happens when he goes off on tour. You've writing style has me totally captivated and can identify with the angst that poor Shuichi is going thru'. BTW, the addition of the cat is brilliant as are your other original characters. Here's hoping your next chapt will be updated soon.

Hey... Thanks for updating quickly enough. I really like that chapter... but I also can't stop thinking about Ch. 4 and it came to me that if you had added that up at the beginning of the sequel, you'd had have to write about it in Realities of Life and Somewhere in Between as well as a source of some angst that you'd have to have the characters deal with it. So... anyway are you going to write about Tohma's reference as to why he let Shuichi try to seduce him? Are you going to let Eiri know about what "almost" happened between Tohma and Shuichi?

Keep on writing... If I get 3 more chapters in the course of this week, I'll write a review for each and every one of your chapters in Illusions of Life. Fair trade, don't you think?