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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love Desert Punk, I have to say, this was pretty dry. The action (one of the main points of the series) was not involving, and the sex was not descriptive enough. Please elaborate more next time you write a fic; this one could have been/could be great with a little work.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You suck. This story is terrible. Go away. Is that clear enough?