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September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this needs a Incest tag in the description cuz of motoko and her hot sister geting it on
hope u update soon
i vote motoko finds her girlfriend soon!
hope u update soon
i vote motoko finds her girlfriend soon!
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
did u end this?? thats to bad if u did
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August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this chapter looks much better. See, a little extra time really goes a long way. Now there's nothing to distract from the sexyness!
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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot!!! like always
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
when is next chapter??? plz hury
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has some really hot ideas, and good taste in characters, but the writing style is only okay, and the bad grammar is really rampant through it. If you just cleaned it up a lot, maybe with a proofreader or something, then this could be more than just an amusing little guilty pleasure.
Anyways, I'd like to see Renamon in it.
Anyways, I'd like to see Renamon in it.
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Shiva! From Fainal Fantasy games! She and Motoko can have fun with ice "sculptures!"
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to hear about your writer's block...hope it ends soon! Heres my request...Motoko goes to the world of Chrono Trigger game and has fun with Schala and her mother Zeal who are secret lovers...ya its crazy but its HAWT! Oh and also count me as another vote for Motoko finding her love soon...
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i love this fic yuri ftw, my fave chapter was with sabrina, i think u shoudl put her in it again, i wanna see her psychicly dominate more ladies!
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August 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this sotry is even better then ur shinobu one, and i love shinobu a LOT!! keep it up