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Well, that was certainly well, hmm, how do I put this?
Ah ha! I got it!
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Wait, no I don't.
Um, anyways, great fic, long as hell but it was certainly a sight to behold. I could care less about the pairing, not because I just don't care, but because I'm a heartless bastard. However, you may have put some warmth back into this cold soul for just a bit of time.
From the chasm of my brittle black heart, I thank thee, and bid you fare well.
Untill we meet again, this is CrazyIvan, no words of wisdom today, semper phi, carry on...

Congrats on finishing! Proofreading and occasionally writing for this fic was lots of fun. Nice job on the longest yuri fic ever!

Wow I cant belive this is over it's got to be the longest yuri ever on this or any other site well with that said loved the endings The one with Sabrina was so hot I loved all of the toys that she showed Mokoto I wish I could get hold of a lot of those things and as for the hot springs ending that was asome as well I dontt thik I've ever seen that many girls in one chapter of any story

Tia the Sexy Slave

Dear god you fracking basdard. Do you have any idea how many chapters I had to read from where I left off? Well, I don't recall the exact amount, but seeing as it is nearly two hours after I began, it was the equivilence of an Encyclopedia or an owners manual to a phased plasma array system.
Anyways, that was just an unbelieveably large amount of hot girl on girl(or in some cases girls) quality smut. I saw hardly any spelling errors, and the formating was nicely done. I can give you no requests nor ideas because that's just how I roll. So, untill we meet again, this is CrazyIvan, once more unto the breach.

On a side note, I regret to inform you, that all stories of mine have been put on hold. The exception being my current product of Wrong Turn at Wormhole 117, which is on extended delay. As for Overheated, well, I went through three roughdrafts, but scrapped them all, I simpily can't get the perfect scripture I seek, and I don't submit anything less than perfect, unless of course I'm being a lazy/cheap ass bastard.
Anywho, just though you should know about this development. I don't know when, and I don't know how, but eventualy everything will be finished (like anyone really cares) so keep your hopes up, but leave them supressed a bit.

Now then, as my Great Aunt Vasha once said,"Is there no pie with that the dog likes not?" (Transliterated Russian to English, deal with it bitches)

Ivan, out...

Wow, the finale is coming...it's sure been fun getting here! Loved the recent chapter with Fran; she's no Renamon, but furry lesbian action is always welcome!

ohhh I liked the Yomiko one! I also like the Fran one as well but I loved the Yomiko one!

i dont care who she does it with, but it would be awesome if motoko and some girls got together and used a 4-way dildo or vibrator

oh me likie!Me likie!Maybe you sould try hooking Motoko up with Yomiko from Read or Die. I donno just something that came to my mind.I really love the stories though!

I like the idea of Chhii from Chobits. She could turn out to be a huge underwear afficionado! After all she did have fun going to buy some panties in that one epsiode...you could have motoko and her explore thong wedgies, fingering and licking against the underwear instead of going around it or taking it off, sniffing and tasting each other's undergarments...Chii would probably wear something lacy and white...there's lots of stuff to do with underwear fetish that you haven't tried so far!

Hows THIS for an awesome idea: Motoko meets Chi Chi from DBZ, and in order to fuck her she's gotta wrestle her into positions where Chi Chi can't prevent her from slipping her a little finger or something like that!