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Man long time since i read this it's okay oh and i vote for her to find her girlfriend

ur not gona do next cchapter till 4 more reviews? damn thats cold man

Really good! hope Motoko finds her true love soon! But first how about she has a little fun with Ayeka and/or Sasami from Tenchi Muyo series?

How about Schala and her mom Zeal from Crono Trigger? Their hot.

hey, you updated! great stuff like always! hey heres an idea: motoko is going to difrent worlds right, well, have her go to a difrent reality of her own world...where she meets herself! that her never had to go on the journey because she and one of the lh girls fell in love together, lets say shinobu because i love motoko and shinobu together, or maybe even her sister, i dont know her name, so motoko decides to have some fun with herself before she leaves!

Wow, I haven't been here for a while...this is a really long and great story, just wat this place needs, some down and dirty and hot lezzie sex! Hey, remember how I requested Tinkerbell? Will she ever be in it? I really want to see her in some yuri......(puppy dog eyes) Pwease?

Whenever you get back to updating and you're done with the Azumanga part, I'd love to see Kasumi from Ranma 1/2 get it on with Motoko. Oh and I'm curious like the rest: show us Motoko's girlfriend soon!

hope ur back soon! this fic is great!

great to see a new chapter, i was getting worried! it was hot, can't wait to see the next one, but will it have motoko in it? i mean, it wouldn't feel right for this fic if motoko weren't in each chapter.

Well god damn man, I have no fucking clue where you come up with all this but hell, it's damn good. Dunno why i never found this before... So, is this sword chick an original character of yours? I am guessing by the looks of it she is into chicks only, so that narrows down pairings from 10mil to 5mil. o.O But yeah, salright. Why don't you have some of your killer flesheating pandas in with some hot action? I mean you do have female ones right?
Well, then again, that's kinda fucked up, well, speaking of fucked up look whos talking, er, typing...
Uh yeah, well i havce no ideas for you off the top of my head nor the tip of my ass, so you're currently on your own. I'll stick around for the next instalment, so don't keep me waiting, I'll sick my soul sucking penguins on you in addition to your flesh eating pandas! MUH HA HA HA! Ivan out....