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Ooo. That sounded a lot like Zoro. I can definitely picture that coming from his mind. He makes a good point too.

beautiful. and i mean that. just...so violent and very much zoro~ish. short, sweet, but perfectly captures what it is that makes people believe so strongly in luffy. i like how you twisted the bell's apparant meaning into something a bit closer to the mugiwara no kaizokudan. in the storyline, luffy wanted to ring it for monburen, but what you described fits so well with what we can imagine luffy's nakama thought about it.

abi

ps: i absolutely LOVE introspection and character stories! i hope you write more, seeing as you quite good at it ~<3

I enjoyed it. <3 Your Zorospeak was fun to read and wasn't really OOC, that's hard to do too seeing as the bastard doesn't talk all that much in the show anyways. You did a good job, and I liked how you made Zoro talk about Lufy, it made me get a silly smile on my face.

Your Zorospeak was fun to read and wasn't really OOC, that's hard to do too seeing as the bastard doesn't talk all that much in the show anyways. You did a good job, and I liked how you made Zoro talk about Lufy, it made me get a silly smile on my face. (Stupid review app. cut off my thing)