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for The Imaginary World

by LucyMay

person Reist
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. It is great how you put it. GREAT STORY! Love how you put that Muraki did not win. Yeah! :)
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I have to say this...I absolutely...completely, undoubtedly LOVE this story. Your characterizations are well written and this story is well thought out. You introduce all the new characters and their personalities into each chapter so smoothly that it doesn't have the feeling of it being bogged down by too much going on. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see where you take this.

Cinders~
aka Kimonomaker
person karen
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot and beautifully written, I might add. Excellant work.
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Koneko-chan loves lemons!! :D TsuSoka forever!! w00t!! Must have more!! I'm still wondering what Byakko and Hy as well as Watari and Jarrett are doing. Ah! A hentai mind is a wonderfully amazing thing! :P
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
person karen
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh don't leave it there! Not when Tsuzuki and Hisoka were getting it one (very hotly at that) and now they ran off after something. I'm dying to know what happens next.
person lily
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellant chapter. I like where this story is so far heading. Its nicely written and I like how you portray the characters.
person karen
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool! You're writing another part to your series. This was a great chapter and now I can't wait for the next one to come out.

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