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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is truly excellent. I'm at a loss for words because nothing I type here can represent my amazament and happiness at such intelligent, ingenuis, sumptuously erotic writing. This is the Death Note smut I was waiting for! I feel like shouting out to the sky a grand hallelujah! This is prefection--and now I know I will have a hard time finding anything that can measure up to this excellence. Your characterization of L and Light is dead on. I felt I was reading a true erotic extension of the manga, and now I'm spoiled for life. I want more, and can only beg you to try another story--but will not expect it, because some acts are hard to follow. Thank you so much for posting this. You have no idea how much I enjoyed it on every level, physically and mentally. Glorious.
Julie
Julie
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, that was hot.
The humanphys facts were disturbing at first but you REALLY made the terminology work towards the end--especially with L's gradual forgetting of all of it XD very very sexy. props.
The humanphys facts were disturbing at first but you REALLY made the terminology work towards the end--especially with L's gradual forgetting of all of it XD very very sexy. props.
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November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. I will be quoting this for a week. In mixed company. That was EXTREMELY entertaining.
I like how you capitalized Getting Into Light's Pants. That was typical Lness.
Thanks. I was having a bad day. Now I'm not.
I like how you capitalized Getting Into Light's Pants. That was typical Lness.
Thanks. I was having a bad day. Now I'm not.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was good. i really loved it.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was just so... so... perfect :p
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^___^ Very nicely written, it was pleasure to read it. *grin*
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. I loved how this was all an investigation to L and he didn't lose track even at the end. The underwear part was just...really really well written and humorous.
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
100% awesome <33333
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I need a cold drink now! I really do. That was hot!
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August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please allow me to applaud you with a single, ear-splitting scream.
GYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(It translates, loosly and briefly, as "Well done. I was tickled pink.")
I will return at a later time to leave a more coherent review.
GYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(It translates, loosly and briefly, as "Well done. I was tickled pink.")
I will return at a later time to leave a more coherent review.