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for Business as Usual

by laurabryannan

person fuzzybunnytoo
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has been one of the best stories that you have written. I like the AU classification and you do a real good job with it. I hope you decide to do another AU just for the fans that like it. Please. And let me know if you do. I appreciate it if you do.
person IS THIS THE END
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WTH!!!!!
Before i go crazy just want to say beautiful story couldn't believe I actually read it all so fast but it was worth it.
Now then...
WHADDAYA MEAN THE END!
Does this really solve the plot lol.
Anyways good...great! story :) keep up the good work.
person fuzzybunnytoo
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was good not as hot as some but very good. I love everything youu write,by the way how did the conntest at the anime convention go? You wone didn't you. You had too.
schedule April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. The progression of their relationsip and their dynamics are stunning as always! Thumbs up to the introduction of both Yatsuha and Fuu, I really like how you are incorporating all of the characters. Great stuff!
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Review As Uaual---------Yummy...K?
person Loquora
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know I love you, your fics and their hottness. I just have to say thank you for posting this in big pieces for all to see. Yay! (btw 'bankai' is still my favorite part of this. hehehehehe)
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mwa ha ha! Bleach reference! It's great! I loved that part. I laughed my ass off.

With that said. Lovely, lovely angst my dear. And the smut is still as hot as ever. I am really enjoying the addition of Yukimaru in this and I look forward to every update! Your characterizations are great!
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty is really good and the plot is comming along nicely and oh ,how I love it when you put a litle sex in every chapter for you know us fans so well. I see in my e-mail that another chapter is ready and I first do a happy dance then go for the read. mmmmmmmmmmmmmm delisious.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read this in a different place but others have not and they read these reviews before they read a story, if you are one of these people READ THE STORY you will love it and it will become your favorite. by the way this is my favorite author and will turn out to be yours, too. If not you can write me and give me a word lashing.
person RinjiGrey
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay for the update! youre one of the few writers out there who actually keeps the story going, doesnt just give a few chapters then disappear for years haha. i like the humourous cliff hanger at the end and its funny, during the phone convo with jin and fuu, i could almost hear her rattling on like she tends to do :) cant wait for more.

rinji

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