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Oh, what do I say about this chapter....it was mind boggleing. The feelings were so intense and real and I felt them along with the characters. You write like you are in their skin. Jin is Jin and Mugen is Mugen and they are both entirely different people. It is absolutlly amazing. You are the best and when I see you have a new chapter I go absofuckinglutelly nuts. There are not enough words to describe how much I loved this chapter.

Just read this chapter on ff and as you know you can not review twice so I am here to tell you after I read the chapter and was sitting there thinking about it I brought my hands up to rest them under my chin and so help me I smelled bbq sause...laugh if you want but it is the truth.If every chapter keeps getting better like it has I am going to be a puddle of mush after then end. Really BBQ sauce....can you believe that?

Chapter 4 of Business as usual is missing. Just thought you'd like to do know. I'd like to just read the sex scenes... but yeah well.

After sitting reading for several hours because i have a new computer and the new screen is so much more comfortable to read from, I decided to go for an after read relaxing soak. Something in my mind said 'just check on the Samarai Champloo cite of AFF' just to see(as I always do before retiring to other interests), And there on the top of the list was Business as Usual and I just jumped for joy and glggled my best school gril crush giggle. I almost could not click the mouse fast enough without shaking in antisapation. And, of course the writing was exqusit and so discriptive I was in heaven in no time at all. I read slowly and devoured each morsel as I would a strawberry cheesecake. I didn't even use the napkin but used my tounge to gather every noun, verb, adverb and adjective. Oh, how delisious... as my mind sits and diegests the wonderful prose thinking about the future and the next meal for the mind. Thank you for the lovely meal.

Great chapter, just keep it up i am so hooked and I need my fix asap.

Read this on your site but thought I'd leave a review here. Still lovin' it! So smutty, so angsty, so realistic, it's great. I love the addition of Yuki because frankly, Yuki is hot, too. The developing relationships between all three is wonderful though that was a hell of a cliffie to leave us on. At least, I'm grateful it wasn't a smexy cliffie! Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more.

Oh! What an awful spot for a cliffhanger! But you're story is as wonderful as ever. Thank you so much!

I have to leave a review because this is the best fiction on the site. Great AU with the characters in character and I am looking forward to finding out the future. Great read.

to all who read the reviews before reading a story----READ THIS STORY----you will love it!

I love you SO much ;-; -hearts appear in various places around the ficcu-