rate_review Reviews

Oh , my , dear, chapter 11 is a diamond. It sparkled it was written so well. I adored the....EVERTHING (i CAN'T THINK OF ONE MISSED STEP IN THE WHOLE CHAPTER) I am so glad you are up dateing often It makes me soooooooooooHappy. POCKY FOR EVERYONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The three of them are undeniably hot. I am in awe of the smutiness. I love this. No defined pairing but enough smut to go around. Everyone's in character, well as close as you can get considering it /is/ AU. And Yuki is definitely a man in need of some lovin'. Poor guy just doesn't get a chance in the show. What a waste of a good bishie. Ooh, for the cliffie... I can't wait until the update.

mmmm, mmmm Good. I just love the way you write. This chapter was so good. These two are my favorite couple of all time. Thanks again for the delisious meal.

This is a great story =D

I love SC fanfics and yours by far is one of ym favorites. By the way was that a Cowboy Bebop joke i spy at the end of chapter 9? =O

I really like this fic because it is AU and a really good AU. I usually don't read Au but I would read your grocery list you write so well. I am enjoying this story very much. Gemme, Gemme, Gemme, More! (lick lips in anticipation of next chapter)

So. Hot. You win. You made my dreams come true. That's all I can say.

"You're not really a package deal, are you?" That question cracked me up. Imagine if they were! That's even more hilarious. Ah, but I am much relieved now. That tension that built up while waiting for an update has abated with that wonderfully steamy 3-way lemon. Yum, is all I can say. I look forward to the next installment and I'm grateful you didn't make me suffer with another cliffy.

Chapter 8 - GREAT! When I see you have updated I get so excited and happy. I know there is delisious reading ahead. Thanks for the fun.

Oooh, I'll admit, I called you nasty names when I got to the end of this chapter, leaving me wanting like that. I was all primed and ready to go and then bam! to be continued... gahhhh. I shall be haunting both your site and aff.net until this gets, updated, I shall. I must see this through to the end.

One thing I really liked was this line, "...Hip hop scratching with a dirty bassline. Oh yeah! He rocked, strutted and worked the hottest burlesque his appreciative lover had ever experienced..." Sort of worked in that whole strange amalgam thing the Champloo anime has going on. Brilliant, I must say, leaving me efficiently jealous.

Update soon, I'm begging you.

Wow, once again, really awesome. This story just keeps getting better. I can't wait for more! A threesome would be really awesome. *evil grin*