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for Sugar Rush

by Himenokori

person Hestia
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's sort of weird to read huge thing in one "chapter" here--I'm used to each chapter on a separate page, which is a silly comment I guess. This is the third of your stories I've read, and it is impressive how complex and detailed your stories are. They also blend diverse anime very well! The romances are excellent, the sex hot, and a lot of comedy involved as well. The abuse thread in this story was very informative and touching! I especially loved all the JJ and Lord D scenes!!
person dextrousleftie
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I've read all of your Pet Shop of Horrors stories. I don't usually review, but I know how much I like to get good reviews on my own stories. It makes me feel good to know that people are enjoying them. I've really liked all three of your stories, even though I don't generally care for Mpreg stories. Good job, and I'm looking forward to the next one.
person ella
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very intiguing and well planned out fic. Such excellent work that I can hardly wait for the next part! I especially like what you've done with Lord D's character. It's so nice to see he has a vulnerable side as opposed to the heartless yet flakey psycho we saw in the manga.

There is one detail that keeps bugging me though. You've never explained why Kami births are so hard, I mean why is a c-section so impossible if things go badly?

Is this one of those ways they're just too different from humans, like the infant is not just connected through an umbilical cord but an entire network of veins like the roots of a plant so trying to remove it unnaturally would just cause hemmoraging in both parent and child?...yeah, I know, I have way too much free time. ^^;
person Darkness
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can see why it takes so long to put a new part out but, do you have to stop it when it starts to get really good. You are doing a great job with this story and i look forwared to the next part.
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeeha!! You posted Sugar Rush! WOW! There is just sooo much here and it is all good! It also touched me very deeply. I have just had knee surgery and when I woke up from it, I was very depressed and morbid. Then I had to spend two days in bed with nothing to do but think and that made everything worse, all I did was think bad thoughts about how very short life is and how very fragile. I became overly aware of my own mortality and I was stressing over it badly. Then I found your update and read the New Years Eve conversation between Queen Victoria and Lord D and it made me feel much better. All the bad stuff went away and I feel much better now. Thank You.
This story is as good as the other two and I really enjoyed reading it, so much happened! Lord D and JJ? Who would have thought? They really go good together and I can't wait for the next instalment to find out what happens to them! And the baby still has not arrived! And Leon and D and Ryo and Dee and .... gosh just so much is going on and I am trying to wait patiently for the next update!



























































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