rate_review Reviews

You know the old saying "I don't know about art but I know what I like"? Well it's the flip side for me, I don't know much about writing but I know what I like, and I really do like your story.
I simply Love the way you used Lupin's coat and how Zenigata reacts to it, simple, passionate and brilliant.
I wish All erotic fan fiction were like this.

Definatly one of your best, Empy!!! even though the thought of pops naked kinda freaks me out.....it still really great!!

*applauds* Fantastic work! I truly hope this isn't a one-shot deal, it would be fabulous to see it continued. Even if it isn't, it would still stand alone very well. You've got Lupin's character down pat, as well as Koichi's. Very passionate, and the sex scene was a work of art. I was pleasantly impressed by your ability. Last but not least, your story was very neatly wrapped up at the end with that final line, which I thought was a perfect ending to the whole thing.

Kudos,
Florville