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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing because you asked so nicely =)
This is very nice. Adorable! AH!!
I can't wait to read more, gah. I hope there's more after the next chapter. You're an amazing writer, never stop. I mean it =P
This is very nice. Adorable! AH!!
I can't wait to read more, gah. I hope there's more after the next chapter. You're an amazing writer, never stop. I mean it =P
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The lemon was wonderful but I still wonder what had happen to the key? And if Raito is playing L... Since he got him to unlock them and he could easily slip away and such...
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just fantastic XD The sex scene was so fucking erotic and believable...and the idea of L utterly drunk in a girly party, just glorious. Thumbs up, hon!
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story was so fun to read, and very funny.
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GOD! It was amazing *______________* The best RaitoxL story I ever read *___________________*
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! A well done Death Note Fiction!! Thank you soo much! This was great! I can't wait to get to the later chapters!! Yay! ~^.^~
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The best DN fic I've ever read^O^
It's just great, I love characters and sex scene is just arousingly great^_^
Well done^O^!
It's just great, I love characters and sex scene is just arousingly great^_^
Well done^O^!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>w<
zomg that was a.w.e.s.o.m.e.!
zelly's not good at commenting, but wowwie! -enjoyeded-
zomg that was a.w.e.s.o.m.e.!
zelly's not good at commenting, but wowwie! -enjoyeded-
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Noooo Noooo! the story started so nicely, why did you have to make Raito seme? and it was all well written, and little to non OOCness, so why, oh why does raito have to top? *sulks in the corner* [if you change it I'll love you forever 0.0 meep.]
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATETHIS GREAT STORY