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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kya!!! It's so cute!! And full of yumminess!! I thinnk my stomch just melted into fluffy yaoi goop!! This is also the first time I've ever liked any AFF story enough to review, and I read a lot!! I loved the story, thanks so much!!!
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LLOOOVED IT
I hope yhis wasnt the last chapter :] please update fast yay
I hope yhis wasnt the last chapter :] please update fast yay
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm feeling ridiculously lazy to log in right now... XP
That was funny and hot. I had to clamp my hand over my mouth to keep from bursting out laughing at the part where L was telling Raito the crap about Kira being gay and the computer program he'd made for finding the exact percentage of probability.
And I somehow like L uke, so yeah, nice smut piece.
That was funny and hot. I had to clamp my hand over my mouth to keep from bursting out laughing at the part where L was telling Raito the crap about Kira being gay and the computer program he'd made for finding the exact percentage of probability.
And I somehow like L uke, so yeah, nice smut piece.
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a very good story. i like how L keeps analyzing everything all through it, that seems very much like him. and the lemon was hot (yum!), and realistic. great job!
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October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so good. Please give me more.
Very good writing and some very nice smex =)
Very good writing and some very nice smex =)
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, I like that one. It's paced well, and Humorous too.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm impressed. I LOVED the lemon. It was absolutely delicious. God, I want more. ;P
But, yes... Admittedly, I was a bit hesitant to see L as the uke, since it didn't seem appealing... But, you've pulled through with making a wonderful story/lemon about this "reversal of roles." Really, the story is an amazing piece of work. I only noticed the couple of errors in grammar and spelling... Other than those, I found no flaw in your story... As a result, I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Keep up the fantastic work. Good luck continuing your fiction.
But, yes... Admittedly, I was a bit hesitant to see L as the uke, since it didn't seem appealing... But, you've pulled through with making a wonderful story/lemon about this "reversal of roles." Really, the story is an amazing piece of work. I only noticed the couple of errors in grammar and spelling... Other than those, I found no flaw in your story... As a result, I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Keep up the fantastic work. Good luck continuing your fiction.
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah YUM. more soon please!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely ADORE how you went from uke to seme raito--and XDDDDD it's so true, Raito is like the metro-est metro that ever graced the planet.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love this story. You've made me actually like L as the uke. I didn't know that Neko was another term for uke. *giggle* Please write the next chapter fast!!!! You're soooo good!!