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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I so totally disagree with your opinion, because I loved it! ^^
Write more such stuff pleeease >.<
Write more such stuff pleeease >.<
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I have the same initials as yer friend but 'm not her. *hiccup* And I'd just like to say it's choppy as hell. Very choppy. So choppy that it's like, a Japanese cook cutting cabbage choppy. Yes, THAT choppy. And stinky, too. Very stinky. *hiccup* And I can't remember why the hell I read this... Or... where I am for that matter... Actually, who the hell are you again?
(is definitely a lush)
I hate this fic. Hate it. Hate it cause I love it. I think. Not sure. Alright, I'm leaving this crap site. Have fun eating your cabbage.
(is definitely a lush)
I hate this fic. Hate it. Hate it cause I love it. I think. Not sure. Alright, I'm leaving this crap site. Have fun eating your cabbage.
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its good. Not choppy at all. :) do more!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definitely one of the better Z/S fics out there. :D
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Choppy? Oh dear that was anything but. I loved it just as I love ervything you write. It was so descriptive and lovely...I fell in love with it within the first two paragraphs. You are amazing and this story was a true tribute to the One Piece fictions. Sheesh but can you write amazingly wonderful!! You talented person you!! I loved it. Oh and there was nothing corny about it; only original beauty.