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June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot, very well written. More , please!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Adored it!!
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting..I have to read the whisper story now :)
really love your style of writing; it's very good..and it's rare to see lemons like this; it's usually "Bang boom inside it's done" style, so I love variety
also enjoyed the sweetness among other things...and the grammar is pretty well done too; everyone is in character and what not
really need to read more kaworu/shinji fanfiction again :/ it's now just gaixlee naruto yaoi smut...or gaalee..or something besides kakashixiruka or narusasu..tired of the usual fanfiction...
keep up the good work
really love your style of writing; it's very good..and it's rare to see lemons like this; it's usually "Bang boom inside it's done" style, so I love variety
also enjoyed the sweetness among other things...and the grammar is pretty well done too; everyone is in character and what not
really need to read more kaworu/shinji fanfiction again :/ it's now just gaixlee naruto yaoi smut...or gaalee..or something besides kakashixiruka or narusasu..tired of the usual fanfiction...
keep up the good work
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your story, Whisper, today, and nothing I say could properly convey how amazing I found it.
Your grasp of characterization was stunning, as was the progressive developement of said characterization. I belive the two most joyful to watch were Shinji, for his progression, growth, and general perspective, and Kaworu, all of his observations so very knowing, but not cold, and gentle sincerity. Kaworu's tendancy to affectionally and unrepentently accost Shinji and subject him to his tender mercies made me smile. You possess an masterfully artful grasp of the use of diction and syntax, and even situations of a distinctly surreal nature held a comprehensiveness that is, regretably, absent in much fanfiction.
Beautiful, and I'm going to try and find more of your work. So, if it isn't too much to ask, would it be possible for you to send me a website?
Still utterly enchanted and floating,
Nacht
Your grasp of characterization was stunning, as was the progressive developement of said characterization. I belive the two most joyful to watch were Shinji, for his progression, growth, and general perspective, and Kaworu, all of his observations so very knowing, but not cold, and gentle sincerity. Kaworu's tendancy to affectionally and unrepentently accost Shinji and subject him to his tender mercies made me smile. You possess an masterfully artful grasp of the use of diction and syntax, and even situations of a distinctly surreal nature held a comprehensiveness that is, regretably, absent in much fanfiction.
Beautiful, and I'm going to try and find more of your work. So, if it isn't too much to ask, would it be possible for you to send me a website?
Still utterly enchanted and floating,
Nacht
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the sweetest and at the same time sexiest story I've ever read about Kaworu and Shinji. It was so happy I'm fit to burst. This is such a wonderful story, especially considering that most stories about these two have an undercurrent of sorrow. It so nice to read a happy story for once. Thank you! Yours Herme