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January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
its goood! you should hurry with a second chapter im eager to read it!
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December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh… no.
Script format = BAD writing.
Script format = BAD writing.
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August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Continue of course! What happens next? I must know.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, great story so far. I hope you update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... interesting consep.. but you need to put these " in when they speek. It's not a : you know?