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by FAKEmpregnator

schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh... mPreg is a delicate subject for me- most of it I don't care to read, but some of it I really, really like. This is one of the latter. It's made me very, very happy any time I've read it, and I want to thank you for sharing. ^^

(...Taking pictures of JJ at New Years is making me laugh REALLY hard. XD)
person A2M4snj/moontatoo
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
another beautiful chapter . Dee's ring sounds so lovely the way you have described it. This story is making me feel very ready for Christmas, too . But first I can't wait for the big New Years party !!! Can I be invited too ?
person shiva45
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the proposal, it brought tears to my eyes. I can't wait for the new year's party, and J.J.'s face when he finds out. I know it will be hilarious. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.
person Mazy3261
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! you have to continue it! I've read a lot of FAKE fanfics, and this is by far my favorite. I also like the fact that you had Dee be the pregnant one, and a little more of the uke. I also like how both guys interact throughout the whole story. You have to write more! I must know how it all ends!!! Marvelous job!
person shiva45
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapters, your writing is wonderful, you kept me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for the next installments, and the Christmas surprise.
person A2M4snj
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
here I was having a lousy day, and somehow you manage to slip two wonderful new chapters by me!! very well written. oh how I remember my first labor; believing the lie of "natural childbirth" being controlled simply by pant-blow breathing-HAH! For Child #2 I managed to get an epidural before my water broke, which was good, because he came in only 4 hours and was 2 pounds heavier than child #1! your story is just so very good, the science behind the male-carrier system very realistic.I really liked the transit strike plotline too. keep those chapters coming,please.:)
person Sassenach
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope that I am invited to the party... DO NOT want to miss out on such a momentous occasion... I love this fic *Sigh*
person Dk
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I´m usually suspicious of mpreg-fics, I mean they´re mostly stupid and terribly written, so you can imagine I was very surprised to find a story about male pregnancy that is actually GOOD and believable. I started reading out of curiosity and I´m so glad I did it!
I also loved the fact that you made Dee pregnant and not Ryo, this inversion of 'roles' made things even more interesting.
I cannot wait to see JJ´s and the other guys reactions when the happy couple announce the good news.
Thank you for writing,
Hugs
D
person A2M4snj
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a really well written chapter.you did a great job of covering alot of ground in a logical manner. I love how this secret is oh so close to slipping out! forget taking pics of Dee's face when he gets his ring; take pics of JJ when the poor guy finds out Dee's in a 'family way'! seriously, though,I'm delighted every time a new chapter gets posted. can't wait for christmas and the new years party!
person shiva45
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Thank you. I am anticipating the next installment. Keep up the good work. HUGS!!!!!

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