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for The Unexpected I

by FAKEmpregnator

person rj1ofakind
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Were is an applause smiley when I need one? So easy to read and re-read here. Looking forward to more . . .

rj1ofakind
person Sally
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated! I've been looking nearly everyday. This is a great story, please keep it up!
person shiva45
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update. I love the fact that instead of Ryo being pregnant, you had the courage to make Dee the mother/father to be. I can't wait to read the next installment. Thank you for the wonderful story.
person Ayeshagirl
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that took me a while to read!

Now I must get back to sorting out my life... I hate tidying!

Great chapter, you managed to reverese their roles but still keep them in character. I adore FAKE, and have read all the manga/seen the anime and this really could stand up as a another book!

Ayeshagirl x
person Sally
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god, I love this story.
person Es
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Dee! Poor honey, someone save him? Soon, preferably? Update! You can't leave me like this!! Please? Sorry this is a crap review, but it's 12.30, very dark outside, and I have to get up in three hours. I couldn't not know what happens next!! I'm hoping you'll take pity and let me know what's going on- I'll be beack to r&r the next chapter!
Es
xx
person Ayeshagirl
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dee is so cute when he's vunerable!

I love where you're going with this story, I read a similar one (well... vaguely) with Duo and Heero and this one looks to be just as interesting, if not more because I love FAKE!

Keep up the good work.

p.s. as for the child thing, it depends on how i feel at the end of the story and whether it should end there or if it still seems unfinished.
person sassenach
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its just like sugar... it's sweet and always leaves you craving for more...
person Bluesnake40
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
am not a fan ofmpeg fics but am glad I decided to read this. it's certainly well written and believable, with both Ryo & Dee being in character. Especially liked the fact that you made Dee the pregnant one rather than Ryo. Can hardly wait for the next chapts.
person Ayeshagirl
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh... that was cute! And well written. It made me forget that I was hungry.. heh

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