rate_review Reviews

Every time I reread this piece I see more things that I missed the last time. The imagery is vivid and sexy, yet leaving room for the reader to add what they imagine Yohji's fantasies to be. Succinct is a good thing. I'm glad he has a better understanding of where he stands with Aya than he did before, but I think this works well as a one-shot. Well written as always. Thanks for the hot interlude!

Looks like Aya isn't out of Yohji's reach after all, huh? ^^ Too bad Aya didn't take a snapshot for us--I would've loved to see Yohji's face when he heard the other speak. lol

hahaha that's great!
That happens when you forget to lock the door..
You do know that this is an evil cliffhanger and I hope you write more
*pleading puppy eyes*

melma

Love this. Please tell me you're going to write more? Does Yotan take Aya up on the offer?

Holy Kansas! That was quick (in more ways than one) but good. tee hee! I always knew Aya was into that kind of thing :P