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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope to see the end of this, I read this story a while back, and still no ending chapter...
Hope to see the end!!
Hope to see the end!!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, the way it's formatted, it's like this stream of consciousness erupted from your muse, and just kept going and going... That can be a bit hard to follow in one large helping.
I thought Kaorin would fight harder for Sakaki, once she saw that one display some conflicted emotions after Sakaki broke the bad news to her.
You also could have used Osaka a bit better, having her explain in her unique fashion the reason she spilled the beans. That would make her much more than the tattler she comes off looking like.
All that having been said, this was very creative, overall a very nice fanfic.
Please write more.
W.
I thought Kaorin would fight harder for Sakaki, once she saw that one display some conflicted emotions after Sakaki broke the bad news to her.
You also could have used Osaka a bit better, having her explain in her unique fashion the reason she spilled the beans. That would make her much more than the tattler she comes off looking like.
All that having been said, this was very creative, overall a very nice fanfic.
Please write more.
W.
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thankyou for the lovely lemons in this story. I really enjoyed reading them, you write some good stuff. Thankyou for accepting my challenge and I reward you.
This is wonderful! ^_^
*grins*
This is wonderful! ^_^
*grins*
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January 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why thank you!
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice story, and thankyou for accepting my challenge as well.
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why thank you very much!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesomre fanfic! Very hot and very cute too! Well done!
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cool story! I love that Kagura and Sakaki are together and that thing with Kaorin was cool too. Speaking of Kaorin maybe have her get together with Chihiro because they are supposed to be like best friends (I think)! But anyway I really like this story and hope you kee it going!
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Reviewing Part 2*
THAT'S more like it! Maybe it was a lack of other characters, but this one feels a little more in the spirit, and it was a little easier to follow the motives and stuff, but getting past all that, the second part is just as well-written as the first. (Of course, I'm a fan of putting spaces between paragraphs, but that's only because I do it in my stuff, and I'm a horrible stickler. :P)
Good work! Perhaps you might be interested in writing a few of the Omission shorts from my own story? (Sorry about that, by the way. I didn't know adding a chapter would put it back on top of the listing...)
THAT'S more like it! Maybe it was a lack of other characters, but this one feels a little more in the spirit, and it was a little easier to follow the motives and stuff, but getting past all that, the second part is just as well-written as the first. (Of course, I'm a fan of putting spaces between paragraphs, but that's only because I do it in my stuff, and I'm a horrible stickler. :P)
Good work! Perhaps you might be interested in writing a few of the Omission shorts from my own story? (Sorry about that, by the way. I didn't know adding a chapter would put it back on top of the listing...)
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally! A Sakaki X Kagura Story! and a very well written one too!
It was so sweet and oh so innocent. Well Done!
I do wonder why Yomi wanted to asked Sakaki to come over her house too? In any case you should update! I wonder what their friends will say about their relationship...
Great Work!
It was so sweet and oh so innocent. Well Done!
I do wonder why Yomi wanted to asked Sakaki to come over her house too? In any case you should update! I wonder what their friends will say about their relationship...
Great Work!