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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Agreed. Unfortunately, one doesn't see many Kagura/Sakaki stories. Quite refreshing!
I'd have to say though that as a story it wasn't exactly revolutionary. Not much was taken from the original material to make one buy why what happened happened, though I have to say the spelling/punctuation was above par.
Overall, it felt like the names could have been changed without affecting the story. Not really Azumangaish enough, but that might just be my opinion. But it WAS a decent yuri fic.
"Yay!" *Thumbs up*
I'd have to say though that as a story it wasn't exactly revolutionary. Not much was taken from the original material to make one buy why what happened happened, though I have to say the spelling/punctuation was above par.
Overall, it felt like the names could have been changed without affecting the story. Not really Azumangaish enough, but that might just be my opinion. But it WAS a decent yuri fic.
"Yay!" *Thumbs up*
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August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, wasn't exactly revolutionary, and I tried to add how they spoke to give it more of an Azumanga feeling. I might add another chapter to it, I'll have to see how I feel about it. Maybe Kaorin will come into all of this?? *hint at foreshadowing....NOW*