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April 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Poor Aisha! Though I don't think a regular gun would be able to kill her since she took a blast from a caster shell end it just caused her to fall down with swirly eyes. Maybe if Jim used one of those special caster that Gene got on planet Tenrai that he used at the leyline, that could probably take her out. Or perhaps you could have Aisha survive, but get pregnant with a son. Then she would have a brand new dilemma.
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story. Quite dark. I love it. It shows the side in us that we keep hidden from the world.
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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you got how Jim would become if all that happened exactly cause to me Jim always seamed like he would have lost it completely like that if that kind of thing were to happen after all with as much responsibility as he has put onto him and that he puts onto himself. So i feel sorry for them all, and that just shows just how delicate a family bond that is as close as theirs truly is. But most of all to this story i simply say "WOW.................."
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow i had thought i had read this one but apparently not, it was really good, i wanted to cry abit there.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFUCKINGGOD.....OMGOMGOMG....WOW...........
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September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not pleasant by any stretch, nor even sexy, but something that does definitely stick with you. This fic is an example of a dark fic done right. Nice job.
P.S. "Ripe (With Decay)" is indeed a perfect background ambience to this fic.
P.S. "Ripe (With Decay)" is indeed a perfect background ambience to this fic.
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was so mor bid and some how very sexy 10 outa 10
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August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's got to be the coolest outlaw star fanfic i've ever read
please add more
please add more
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August 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I chose this name on the account that this story is crap and I'm flinging it against the wall!!!! The only thing that's good about this is that I've been inspired to make an actual work of art! I garantee too, it will be so good that people would want to give me better than a 5 out of 5!!!!