rate_review Reviews

Loved the story i beleve it is one of those where although its a single chaptor story there is lots of potential for it to be a multipule chaptor story so i guess wat i am sayin is i hope u decide to continue it im sure there are a lot of poleople out there that eould agree

I consider this story to be the premiere one-shot in this section. Very well written, the content is good and sexy, and the characters are all great. I really can't find any real criticisms for this story other than the stupid pendant thing which, of course was just a tool to enable the good parts. Not really a problem.

Damn, that was hot. Awesome story.

this one is a sexy one..i must say your work never fail to fascinate me and always leave me wanting for more..motoko,tsuruko and keitaro threesome eh..i admit i sometime doesn't like a threesome or more fic but your work is an exception i guess mostly because i agree with how the setting in this story should be done and you write so well that i could just agree with how you think haha..good one hawker..well i should say i love motoko/keitaro pairing but i'm sure with your writing skill i'll also would come to love the idea of kitsune/keitaro..keep writing great fics..

Awesome... nice threesome. That last part really made me laugh ^^

WOW! I bow before the master! *lays face down on the ground* This was amazing!....WOW....just....wow.

lol enjoyed your comment at the end there although I don't really agree lol. Quite good though. Your imagery skills are second to none. I've also always liked the pairing of MotokoxKeitaro. I don't normally read hentai, but I admit I liked reading this one. I liked the whole morning after thing as well lol. I kinda thought you might have Keitaro go off, find the pendant, and try and use it on Naru at the end there though lol. That could be a good idea for a sequal though, but anyway great story. If you don't mind though could you read mine and give me a review. It's Kiba under Love Hina. I would greatly appreciate it and keep up the good work.

whew...man that was hot!!...LOL...very well written as usual...i would like to request a sequel or a continuation to this fic if you have the time....ty

I really liked this one!

This is some good ass sexy stor thngy here man I love it! If the Aoyama sisters Mom went there oh man it would be
kinda great but Keitaro would probably drained of jis life force but at least he would get some with them.