rate_review Reviews

Rx7 seriously wanted you to include their mother...I don't know if Keitaro could handle three Aoyama's since one is hard enough. Nice work.

you talent knows no bounds. this was another excellent fic.

Wonderful. Amazing. Superb. Genius. Perfect. I don't think there are enough words in this language to describe this work. You did it again. And while a sequel is not necessary, a side story about Kei an Motoko's "training" is fine too.

Congratulations.

I may sound pervertied but I agree with Rx7 that it would have been better if Motoko's mom was there too, well better for Keitaro. However it was still a very good story, well one-shot, and I will definitly read it again some time.

Keitaro! That lucky bastard! Another resounding success IMO, hawker. It's a mark of a good author to keep the material fresh and interesting, even though it's familiar territory. I guess I will retract my previous statement about Blizzard being too short now lol. Though please, for the love of God, finish Loss and Redemption 2!! Keep up the good work!

Wow that was great I mean that was just plain WOW I'm not sure what to say other than you have some serious talent

With love; Imasuky Lomae

Again, you've out done yourself Hawker. I love this Love Hina fic. You seem to do so well with bringing out the sexuality of the characters. Thanks for the plesure of reading this and keep writing. Again what are you going to do with Loss and Redemption 2? I am sitll waiting for that next update. Thanks hawker for writing, Love Hina is one of my favorite Manga's ever. And Keitaro and Motoko pairings are so cool...becuse I love Motoko!