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for Keep Your Enemies Closer

by darlingdali

person nomy
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
imagine that!!..a slash on a girl manga that i love and i do sometimes think Ryoki is a jerk and Hatsumi should be with Azusa or Shinogu..but wow..the pairing!! i can imagine it already if it is drawn in the real manga...!! total hotness and full with angst!...pure love your story..!! hope somebody else with do more slash on this pairing!!!
person dimonyo-anghel
schedule October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I'm happy for Shingou and Azusa!! I kept becoming annoyed every time one of them thought the other loved Hatsumi *bleh*
person R.M. moeru
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really good. this is the first fanfic about manga characters that i actually finished. thanks! keep up the good work, hope to see you published soon.
person JenJen
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok,
Thats the ending this story needed. Thank you so much for such a hot andsweet story. look what you did ... you made me all waffy ...
person JenJen
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are made of evil, evil and awesomeness. You cant seriously end it like that! I want more !!!!! I need more, in fact i DEMAND more!
person JenJen
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You! Woman! Gaaaaaahhhh you almost gave me a heart attack when he was eves dropping >.<
I was like nooo don't hear i love you! But as always its wonderfully well written and loooong. >.> you will consider my ebook idea right? Jen
person aninsomniac
schedule September 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, naisu ending! I love that the twists were simple stuff. No rambling he-loves-me, loves-me-not stuff. So easy to fall into that trap. And I do *adore* the way Shin tries to seduce the answers out of Azusa. Very wicked Shin, we have here! Kudos to the author. Hope you write more~
person JenJen
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, read chapter 6. now thats what i was talking about! perfect angst / emotional entanglements damn you for writing so well >.<
person Blue November
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter!!! very buttery! loved it!!
person Blue November
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow! i never thought i could be so aroused at the thought of two men together but...hot damn! More!!! I want MORE!!!! it was buttery!! (finger wiggle)

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