rate_review Reviews

Hi! I never usually read shoujo-originated slash fics, but got into this one with the promise of an 'extremey hot' fifth chap. lol. And boy, it was something! I like how you build the emotions of the characters and the very logical if let-me-knuckle-him-a-bit kind of misunderstanding breeding between Asuza and Shinogu. The smex is VERY HOT. Loved it. And REALLY REALLY hope that there would be more of it. It's always sad when a shoujo manga ignores the 'other' party/parties in a love triangle/quadrangle/orgyfest, especially when they happen to be sexy bishies. I love it, please write more.

Nice start. Everything's really good and the dialogue is awesome. I'll review the other chapters later. Banzai! ^^

Great Story, needs more porn though....