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i swear this has to be one of the most depressing stories I have ever read, but strangely I love it. Usually I don't like reading fanfics that are all thought or mostly thought. it's kinda boring and annoying, but there is always that one exception and this is it. Keep it up. You're doing a great job.

hi ya there! its me again... its really nice to read your fic and i can't seem to have enough of it even though i have read it several times... it never fails to break my heart... i could really feel Shu's pain and the emotions and guilt from Yuki and the others... I'm glad that you didn't kill Shu, i just wanna see how he'd be when he finally gains consciousness... Oooh, maybe Shu can leave Yuki for good and let him that breakdown while Shu starts a new band...? but anyway, that's just a suggestion ;) This is your story anyway...

i can't wait to read what's gonna happen when Shu wakes up.....

hope to see more updates to your fic!

Wow! I LOVe this! You need to write more. ^ ^ .
Sooo good!
I like how in depth you get with the characters, very important and very well done!

Another good chapter. Thanks!

wow. talk about deep. i love yuor wirting style. keep it up!
i was wondering...is that all?? if so, thxs for a good read. if not, write more. plz?

hey, this is me again and i just wanted to let you know what a great job you're doing on this fic ^^ i'm just a voice of encouragment when deserved, so that you for writting this and i hope that you continue it... well... ja ne ^^

OMG I was crying so much while reading this... it's just so... deep and... sad and... *tears* I can't help it I want to read it again and again and cry more and more in order to try and figure out what's going to happen. This fic is one of the best from all fanfiction that I've read yet. And surely the best Gravitation that I've read... please continue it... because everybody needs a good cry now and again, it's what makes us human.

I really love these shuichi suicide fics they really bring a tear to my eye.
A real good ending to this, in my opinion, would be to let Shuichi die and Yuki have a complete breakdown and be commited to a mental hospital. The final chapter can have Tohma pushing the semi-braindead Yuki in a wheelchair along a garden path outside the hospital while talking about where everyone is and how they're doing.

But then this fic is about what you want to write not about what the fans want to read.

I hope you continue with your story.

You write very well, your words bring life to your characters which sadly is often lacking in fanfic. I thought the chapter ending with the words of the chapter title was quite clever.

Hope you decide to continue it!

I have to say I love angst and this is one of the best I've ever read! I seriously felt the same chill as Yuki while reading Shuichi's letter! To be honest I'm too...affected by the story to say more, but I really hope you keep writing because I'd love to read what all the people Shuichi thought he was hurting feel now. Thanks for a great fic! :)