rate_review Reviews

i like it so far. that was also my favorite episode. i can't wait for the second part of this. mugen and fuu.. yay!!!!

This particular scene could've easily been written cheesy. But, I think you portrayed it wonderfully between Mugen and Fuu without making it too mushy, which really contributed to the tension of the situation. Please continue, you've done a great job so far!

Hahaha! Fiirst review!
Annyyhow. O, pretty begining.
Descriptive and I could picture it in my head, even if I already saw that 25th episode.
Duuddee. I'm jealous of you. I'm way too shy to be writing lemons and stuff. But I'll have to get over it, I might have to be writing one soon. Dammit. Ugh.
Anyway. I still love that fact that even though Mugen came for her, he's all like, "RUN BITCH! GODDAMN!"
Ho, I almost busted out laughing.
Anyways, nice story and favorited/alerted and stuff.

.Mii!

I really like your start, and I love the promise of a good mugenfuu fic. Keep going and I look foreword to your next update.