rate_review Reviews

Really enjoyed the build up on this story, I loved it and it was great. Interaction and the plot was well written and I was delighted when Yuuri finally returns his feelings. Thanks for sharing this master piece. :D

I am so madly in love with this story and your writing style, its like we're twins! hahaha. I like how you tell people you don't like Greta, so you keep her out instead of like most people who leave them in and insult them to no end or have the cast doing it. You also as like me in that way and in the sense that your characters do their own thing and you're typing just to keep up hahaha. This story is so wonderful with how you plotted it and how you're slowing turning that *cough* into a wonderful loving person to Wolfram. I love this very much I can't wait for the sequels!!

I enjoyed reading this story. I thought it was quite detailed and intricate, which made it all the more interesting. While I had a bit of a time accepting Murata's perviness, I did like his interaction with Kyota. Great read.

Girl!! haha I missed this story lots! It was worth reading a second time around and through I stumbled a few times, I loved the ending most of all! ^_^_ *hugs you* Thank you! I love those two together.

I'm rereading this just to fall in love all over again. ^_^ *hugs*

GREAT story!!!!

I loved how you described Wolfram! Really in character!

As for Yuuri, he's really good. I liked also the moments where he shows his "dark" side (pretty hot isn't he? ^^)

Yay I am happy that Yuuri and Wolfram got finally together. And now Yuuri seems even more passionate than our blond bishie XD

Well, it has been said in the other reviews, but it deserves to be said again--what a lovely story!

You achieved the goal of the fic so nicely. Yuuri's feelings for Wolfram are well-developed and believable. As you know, I started watching KKM solely so that I could read your trilogy. I only watched the first 5 episodes and, although I liked it, I wasn't particularly taken by any one character as I am with say, certain DBZ characters ;-D But having read this story, And, in fact, it was so successful that I fell in love with Wolfram right along with Yuuri. And I'm ever so happy I did! It has opened me up to a whole new world of characters for me to laugh with and cry with and I enjoyed every second. As you know, I couldn't put the story down, reading it everywhere on my cell phone--just like a good novel.

I have to echo what another reviewer said above about Kyota--he fits into the story and blends with the characters so seamlessly that I might not have realized he was an OC at all if I hadn't been chatting with you while reading the story. He's a wonderful addition for many reasons, not the least of which is the additional angst that his existence brings to the tale. I loved the very first time that he and Wolfram interacted at Yuuri's birthday party. It was hot. 'Nuff said :) And his whole presence really allows us to see another whole side of Wolfram and adds lots of extra angst.

Also, I'll repeat another thing that was said above. A *very* winning mixture of angst, comedy, fluff, and drama in this story. No single one became too much. This is a hard balance to pull off. Kudos to you! I look forward to the second volume :-D

And as I have just looked at a bunch of pictures (your fault entirely) that leave me unable to formulate coherent thoughts, i'll leave you with that... gahhh!!

;-)

After reading this story a second time, it's still a joy to read.

Of course, you notice more things in the writing like grammar, but it isn't too
distracting and doesn't take away from the storyline.

For someone not into KKM, you sure have a grasp on their character, pretty good
if I must say.

super awesome story! Loved it, really loved that part with the wall at the end there ;)

I just finished reading Chapter 2 and I forsee myself clicking the button for the consecutive chapters with no restraint! XDD I had a good laugh at Yuuri thinking everyone was somehow in some kind of abnormal relationship or other. Being sucked into such a world, I can understand the comical paranoia. And Morgif's interest in Wolfram just made me go "Aww"! XD Wolfram does make me feel like pinching him a little though, but that /is/ Wolfram to an extent. XD I can't wait to read the rest.

Comparing 2 chapters of WotP and 16 of WoftGE, I can certainly say that you're good at different writing styles for different genres. WotP has a nice light-hearted humour to it which I do believe is shed for WoftGE. Tying in with this, I notice that WoftGE tends to have slightly more intricate elements that go well with its sombre mood. XD