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Hi! I really love this story of yours so much! I do hope you get to update it soon and finish it up. I really want to find out how Yuuri would be able to convince Wolfram that he indeed loves him and all that stuff.

Your work is amazingly well written. Except for a few typos and grammatical inconsistencies (which doesn't affect the story in any way anyway, so who cares! I certainly don't! :D) it's just a perfect story that celebrates the love between the two royalties.

I do hope you get to update this soon! I am looking forward to it. I'd also love to get to read some more of your works. You're an amazing writer. :)


Stay cool,

Chai aka mizu-majutsu

Yuuri: Wolfram!

Wolfram: What? I leaving you already so u don't have to worry about marrying me!

Yuuri: Well I like you! ...but i'm not gay...so until i make up my mind i'm keeping u in my closet.

Wolfram: so when will i get out of the closet.

Yuuri: Don't worry probably within our lifetimes.

Wolfram: ...

Great chapter! That old man got what he deserved. I like how you described the scenery, and Wolfram's reactions. I anticipate your next chapter.

By the way, the html escape sequence for the umilat is ü. So Gunter becomes Günter to be rendered as Günter. Hope that helps.

Oh, and yes I did see the anime.

Hi there! :-)
Remember me? i'm really sorry I haven't reviewed for a long time, but I've been ill for a long time now. Sorry, I'll make it up to you, kay?!
Hmm... I must say that I'm starting to feel the teensiest bit sorry for Yuuri. I don't know why, really. Must be because I'm a Yuuram fan deep down, and hate to see them fight (The tension is so thick during their fight. ^o^ How on Earth do you write scenes like that?!) I'm glad that he's starting to realise his feeling for Wolf, but not yet acting them out. NO ONE just goes; "Oh, I kinda find you attractive now, so lets have sex and get married". And marriage at such a young age. No wonder if he's kinda freaked ot. Btw, IF/(when) Yuuri accepts his future in Shin Maokoku, will he age 'naturally' as any other demon?
And I'm really glad you decided to explore his powers some more. After all, he still has a 'dark side'as the Demon King. He's not only a wimp. XD
As for Wolf; Noooo...don't decide to marry Kyota. BAD WOLFY! ..Sniff...
You are still the best KKM author out there, and I continue to enjoy your story. Plese update soon.

~KaraQ

awwww the poor boys. i wish they could convey their feelings properly instead of fighting : (

good job, i cant wait for more!

Wonderful story, Chayron! This is my first time reading a Kyou Kara Maoh fanfiction story; I enjoyed it very much. I also look forward to the next update. As usual I love your writing style. The way you open up the development and the character insights are really captivating! Keep up the great work.

I really love this story. I have been reading it for hours, I just couldn't stop! I must have more!

This is absolutely wonderful. I've been reading for a while now, but from the dark recesses of the silent world. I love what you've done. A feasable idea, actual PLOT, promise of man-sex (YAY!), and reasoning!
I think you can make this work, really. I mean, it's a lot like FAKE (if you've read it). Actually, I read a fic for that once where Ryo was explaining his sexual orientation. He said he wasn't gay, but could be described as "Dee-sexual," because he loves Dee no matter what his gender. It just took him a while to accept that in himself.
Same idea, different fandom. I love your original characters, too (which is not normal for me). Please keep up the magnificent work!

Another great chapter! I love how fast you update and I can't wait for the next one! But those two need to make up already so they can start talking about their own relationship! ^_^