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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i hope the time on earth will yuur time to see what wolfram have to get to him .. the chapter was good and yuur is getting feeling for wolfram. but wolfram is notget it . can not wait for next chapter . up date soom.
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi ya! Another fantastic chapter...*eyes shimmering with tears of joy*. And longer too! :D I actually read this yesterday but just when I went to review it was time for AdultFanfic to backup! Grrr. So I turned off the computer and went to bed. But today I must review your fabulous Story! But there is one thing I have to ask, when in chapter 12 or 13, I think, when Yuri noticed the hickeys on Wolfrem and got really angry, Yuri didn't encase him in that water bubble? It was just how they were weirdly transported to Earth? In which Yuri did and not the Great Sage? He could do that? I haven't watched the whole Anime here and I was also wondering, has Yuri ever tried to teach Wolfrem how to play baseball? That would be funny LoL ;D
By the by, I do write fanfics, but only Hellsing at the moment. I've noticed there is no Full Metal Alchemist fanfics on adultfanfic!!!! Shock, horror, depravity!!!! So I might just have to write one for that. But mostly I write my own works of fiction. I would love to write a Kyo Kara Maoh fic but I think I haven't watched enough of the anime and I only have up untill chapter Five on the manga.
With the girl thing...oh so thats why LoL. I suppose not many guys can take it..cough cough..;D
You write DBZ TOO!!! O_O who are your pairings? Where are your stories???? Must know! Must read more of your work!!!!! Till you update again!!!!!
By the by, I do write fanfics, but only Hellsing at the moment. I've noticed there is no Full Metal Alchemist fanfics on adultfanfic!!!! Shock, horror, depravity!!!! So I might just have to write one for that. But mostly I write my own works of fiction. I would love to write a Kyo Kara Maoh fic but I think I haven't watched enough of the anime and I only have up untill chapter Five on the manga.
With the girl thing...oh so thats why LoL. I suppose not many guys can take it..cough cough..;D
You write DBZ TOO!!! O_O who are your pairings? Where are your stories???? Must know! Must read more of your work!!!!! Till you update again!!!!!
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! (again!) Would have reviewed sooner, but our power has been out. (damn wind. XD)
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! That was so cute. lol. Yuri's reactions have to be the most adorable thing ever. lol. I know I sound like a fangirl, but it was just so cute. His blush at the end made me squeal like a middle school fangirl.lol. Can't wait for the next one.
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*patiently waits for friday to come*
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sob..sob..sob...you have to write more..hipcup..sob...I need more!Too short! Too short! Damn this is a great story!
But your message to me, man that was long! I loved it and agree with you 100% You can complain and whine to me all the time luv, like I said , I fullheartedly agree with you! Those people on fanfic.net argh! Words can not describe how some of them irratate me with their spelling, using there, insted of their, or wear insted of were or where! You've got me complaining now! But I totally agree with you on MSExplorer too, I despise, no loathe the thing too! I use Mozilla though, eh, it gets me by.
Oh and in regards to ya story, I am a really, really a fast reader and with your story I just couldn't stop reading!! My eyes just flew wanting more and more! So good, so good, I was growling and bitting peoples head's off who had disturbed me while I was reading! Honestly! (Your story is involved, don't be modest now! or maybe I'm just reading too much of that crap on fanfic.net with everyone out of character and absolutly no plot and always demanding reviews? But your story fantastic! everyone is SO in character and there's hardly any mistakes!)but I would say on average for reading your story so far it would probably take about 8-9 hours without breaks maybe for the average person? Maybe?
Anyway me stop blabbering on in this review, you just keep writing and update soon. I've put my email down if you want to contact me further. But you just UPDATE! (I am a girl by the way, most people first think I'm some guy. Shivers, god that is scary..)
Till your next chapter in which I am anxiously awaiting!
But your message to me, man that was long! I loved it and agree with you 100% You can complain and whine to me all the time luv, like I said , I fullheartedly agree with you! Those people on fanfic.net argh! Words can not describe how some of them irratate me with their spelling, using there, insted of their, or wear insted of were or where! You've got me complaining now! But I totally agree with you on MSExplorer too, I despise, no loathe the thing too! I use Mozilla though, eh, it gets me by.
Oh and in regards to ya story, I am a really, really a fast reader and with your story I just couldn't stop reading!! My eyes just flew wanting more and more! So good, so good, I was growling and bitting peoples head's off who had disturbed me while I was reading! Honestly! (Your story is involved, don't be modest now! or maybe I'm just reading too much of that crap on fanfic.net with everyone out of character and absolutly no plot and always demanding reviews? But your story fantastic! everyone is SO in character and there's hardly any mistakes!)but I would say on average for reading your story so far it would probably take about 8-9 hours without breaks maybe for the average person? Maybe?
Anyway me stop blabbering on in this review, you just keep writing and update soon. I've put my email down if you want to contact me further. But you just UPDATE! (I am a girl by the way, most people first think I'm some guy. Shivers, god that is scary..)
Till your next chapter in which I am anxiously awaiting!
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update please!
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Wolfram! *snuggles Wolfram*
Anyways, this is my first review because I just finished the story so far from beginning to end.
You have a fantastic story so far, and I can't wait to read more!
Anyways, this is my first review because I just finished the story so far from beginning to end.
You have a fantastic story so far, and I can't wait to read more!
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this story! You are able to make the characters grow without changing who they are which is not easy. Keep updating the story!
One small criticism: the plural of louse is lice, like mouse and mice.
One small criticism: the plural of louse is lice, like mouse and mice.
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha!!
yuuri: Get dressed go to sleep, and tomorrow when we get back to Shin Makoku I'll kill Docharo and keep his pickled head in our bedroom ! :D
Wolfram: ... O.O
yuuri: sounds like a great plan to me! XD
yuuri: Get dressed go to sleep, and tomorrow when we get back to Shin Makoku I'll kill Docharo and keep his pickled head in our bedroom ! :D
Wolfram: ... O.O
yuuri: sounds like a great plan to me! XD