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Oh, how I love this story! (I had thought I'd already reviewed this story once but checked the reviews page to see that I hadn't!) And you update regularly, which gives you double the awesome points. I can't wait for the next installment! I usually don't like added characters in a story, but you make them work and they only add to the greatness of the overall plot. It's truly interesting; I can't help but love your writing! I'm just here as one more loyal fan of your story. ^^

Oh my. It's going to hit the fan now. The questions will abound and everyone else is going to be looking for those two. Yozak's friends are a hoot. One presumes and the other makes an idiot of himself. I love it. I was unaware that Yuuri could control additional elements, or is that something that you added for your storyline? Oh and no worries about disappointment over Yozak. I'm enjoying your piece just as it is. If I want Yozak pieces, I can find them. I was just following what I thought was the line of discussion. No worries. I Look forward to seeing what happens next as everyone scrambles to find the missing pair, and we find out exactly how Wolfram got there as well. The are so many other things too. Keep up the awesome work. (I don't think Yuuri comes across as homophobic. I think its more a case of he has avoided picturing himself with anyone because of his mother. As well as a reflection of the standards of his home earth.)

OMG! Yay! That made my Thanksgiving break so much better! (I love Kadira and Armano BTW. They bring sunshine to my day. lol.) I can't wait to see what will happen next, and find out how Wolfram ended up in the hole too.lol.

Sorry the last part left me confused! I thought wolfram was indoors how'd he get outside, in the rain?

Ahh! You evil, evil person... although I have to admit you had me laughing throughout the entire chapter, especially with the 'Global Warming' that there was priceless. They're all so clueless it's just hilarious. Please update soon! I only hope things will get more complicated ^-^. Please update soon!

I just thought I'd let you know how much I'm loving your fic! It's well written, thought out, angsty, and filled to the brim with yummy goodness. I love how Yuuri is thinking over his relationship with Wolfram, while Wolfram is quietly freaking out and trying to get over Yuuri. That almost sex scene with Kyota? HOT. I'm all anticipation for chapter 12! Two hot boys, covered in mud, thrown together in thr rain after not seeing each other in quite a while has major potential...even if the 'major potential' is just cuddling to stay warm :D

on a side note, your English is excellent. I didn't have a clue that it wasn't your native language until I read your profile.

Excellent chapter yet again! I cannot wait for the next, now that Wolfram and Yuri are in the same place. :)

Best chapter yet! Yay action! Whoot! I love how you took notice of the masculine and feminine forms of blonde/blond. That was very stylistic and observative. I so can't wait till the next chapter! ^_^

Sorry. I guess I did misread it. No harm though, and now I am even more curious about who you have planned to pair with Yozak.
Wow. Another chapter of everyone figuring out their feelings and situations a little more. Very nicely done. I am intrigued by Yuuri's dreams, and by his seeming realization about why he was having them and feeling sick because of it. -Yuuri's thought about Yozak now claiming he had slept with the king tickles me. That would definitely be in character.- Happenings with Wolfram were pretty intense. He seems quite confused, but I'm glad some of those around him understand and won't take too great of an advantage of things. I really started to get a little concerned about how far Wolfram was going to allow things to go. (I can only imagine the consequences between Yuuri and him as well as the political repercussions of the king's fiancee being unfaithful. Hello great and powerful Moau. My the problems that could develop.) That encounter and his earlier dinner statement are probably going to come back to haunt him. Great job with this chapter. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Loved it! :P I wonder what is going to happen next? -waits impatiently- :) Excellent chapter, by the way!