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for Working out the Paradox

by chayron

person KaraQ
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahem... I think the two of us could go into and in-lenght discussion about Yuuri, Wolfram and the whole of Kyou Kara Maou. ^^
It wasn't a complaint, when I said that Yuuri seemed darker. I like it... a lot, especially since he still has a bit of naivité and the things that make him 'Yuuri'.
Oh my, that scene between Kyota and Wolf. I was like going 'Noooooooo' the whole time, (and yet I was also going;....DAMN HOT!, RAWR!) Lol.
I love the fact that Yuuri is starting to think more of Wolf in a positive way, or in just thinking about Wolfram in general. Yozak and Yuuri sleeping in the same bed made me giggle. I really hope he gets over that; Eww.. .don't touch me. BAD GAY! attitude of his. I mean, he never (in the anime anyway) seemed to have much of a problem with Conrard touching him. But I think it's much more fun reading your fic. XD
Oh, and THANK you for updating so soon. Looking forward to the next chapter.

~KaraQ
person sage_libra
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi. i just wanted to let you know that i am enjoying your fic and i look forward to the next update =>
person chrono_ofDarkness
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! I'm so glad! I really like this chapter btw. I love your original characters at the tavern they were awesome. Thank you so much for updating! Can't to see how Yuri falls in love.
person MsMina
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice development chapter. I do have to wonder if anything will come from Yuuri's knowledge of Yozak's crush. And bravo for going a completely different route (so many writers focus on Yozak and Conrad). I can understand why Wolfram would prefer to be with a male because of his mother and lady's like this. I look forward to seeing what happens next. And like yu said I will "stay tuned."
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better, I am very anxious to see the next chapter! I hope you get it out very soon. :)
person KaraQ
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY! You just can't stop like that! I demand you continue writing right now, so that my obsession with reading your awesome story will be fueled even further. ^^
Oh, so Wolf actually flirted? Will Armano and Kadira play a larger role in the story? Argh, guess I just have to wait and see, won't I? (PURLEASE... just a little hint?!) XD
I also think it's rather interesting that Yuuri is NOT another 'person', when he goes into Maou-mode, and it's my erh..Whatdoyacallit... it seems to me you made Yuuri have a bit darker personality (which is really cool), and I really hope you'll explore that some more.
I hope to see more from you soon. Your updates make my day (which in some way is kind of sad) Lol.

~KaraQ
person goldfish_777
schedule October 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi...I really enjoy reading your writing and character development of Wolfram. I look forward to reading the next chapter(s).
person lad
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you take everything steadily. I'm already bored with the plot "Yuuri realizes he fall in love with Wolfram after 1, he see someone with Wolf , 2, he suddenly see Wolf in a new light ( a sexy light, exactly >_< ) 3, (the worst ) an accident caused by some freaky perfume. They love each other, indeed, not are temped just by bodies. And love need time.
About your idea : "I surely didn’t plan that far ahead in the story, but my characters [bitches!] do most of things without telling me that beforehand, and the maturing is clearly seen, and it will be much of it in this chapter." I like the part the character is maturing. I can understand you let your characters do like who they are. But don't let they OOC too far, ok? ^_^
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! :)
person KaraQ
schedule October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for answering (I love when authors do that) :-)
Lol. Actually I avoid PWP too. I hate when there's no plot and I much prefer the well-written tension (both sexual and otherwise) between Yuuri and Wolfram in your fic. XD
Yay, taverns, and I was pleasently surprised to hear that Kyota and Wolfram didn't do erh.. the hanky-panky. Yuuri may be a wimp, but I prefer to think of him as Wolf's wimp. And vice versa ^^
oh, and I adore you writing long chapters as well. Thank you!

~KaraQ

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