rate_review Reviews

Very nice plot and character development in this chapter. I enjoyed getting to know a little more about what's happening with everyone. Though it didn't seem like Yuri had settled all that much about what is bothering him, but I understand why you wanted Yuri to head back to the castle unexpectedly. Only to discover that Wolfram has left with the other man for at least a month. Oh that will definitely be an interesting conversation to see. I look forward to seeing what will happen next.

Yay! a new chapter! I love the way you describe water and the spirit of those who are strong enough to make a contract with it. Awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow! Great chapter!!! I loved it. Kyouta (sp?) is an asshole but it is understandable on why he acts like that. I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter. I'll be waiting paitently! See ya. (Please tell me when you update! ^-^)

Thank you so much for updating! I can't wait for the next one!

I love this story. when I first started it (long time ago) I thought that with all the angst the engagement would be broken right at the initial dance. But this is soooo much better. I don't think it's too much angst and depressing. They are just hmmmmmm.... mature- that's it. Also it's kind of funny. Yuuri being jealous it too amuzing the way it's writte in this story. I mean Shori is right. Wolfram in this story deserves better than a sudden "You are so attractive I'm taking you now". So really I don't mind waiting it out for the smut or even just fluff. (now what I would loooooooooooove is for Yuuri to get back and start courting Wolfram properly :)-but I'm running away with myself!)
Thanks for taking the time to write!

Excellent story so far! I am enthralled! I hope you update again very very soon, I cannot wait. :)

Somehow this fic is somehow getting more and more depressing (*dies from all the angst*). Can there really be a happy ending?!...and smut?
Both the characters are really growing in their own way, and that's really awesome. I dunno; Yuuri should, on his travel, see some boyonboy action, get drunk and be flirted with or something. We like yaoi, so he should too. ^^ Lol.
I do hope Wolf will continiue being in love with Yuuri, though. And yes, I AM praying for an happy ending...and smut. Yay.
I'm curious to see what the next chapter will be about, so please update soon! ^^

~KaraQ

I'm really excited to find out what happens next! excited and impatient lol. but i'll wait, because i love this fic so much!!

Yay!

Wow, all action at the end, it was great! Although what Shori said to Yuuri is definetely something to think about. Please e-mail me when you update again, and I changed it, if you can tell... ^-^ Hope to see more action and gore!! lol See ya.