schedule
September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm lovin your story please continue.
schedule
September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Wolfram. I hope Yuuri gets things straightened out in his head in time. Awesome writing. I can't wait until the next installation.
schedule
September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well... a brand new chapter to a wonderful story! I hope there's some more action between Yuuri and Wolfram, but that's totally up to you. Anyway, as I was saying earlier: YAYAYAYAYAY!! WONDERFUL! Well.. I hop you update soon. ^_^
schedule
August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok..you got me hooked!~_^!
The scene at the lake was nice and I understand Yuuri was just a little ticked at the soldiers for leering at Wolfram. Who could blame him! And the tender way he took care of Wolfie after the sword bit him...something is there. Whether he wants to admit it or not.
I understand Wolfram's frustration... and trepidation...his feeling of foreboding as to how his life is gonna change after the birthday ball, but hasn't it changed already, because of the slap? Maybe they need to get caught out in the rain more often. Maybe that will soften Yuuri's heart towards him... or will he just be doomed...stuck in a onesided relationship... suffering with a bad case of unrequited love...because he fell for Yuuri... hard!
All in all I find I like the characters and the story...but I hate that damn pink gown! It makes him all frilly and girly and I don't think it helps his cause... but...he is cute and has a great personality...and that character may hopefully help him win the day...or not! well... here's to you Wolfram...at least he thought well enough of you to bandage your hand...Lot's of TLC there!~_^!
The scene at the lake was nice and I understand Yuuri was just a little ticked at the soldiers for leering at Wolfram. Who could blame him! And the tender way he took care of Wolfie after the sword bit him...something is there. Whether he wants to admit it or not.
I understand Wolfram's frustration... and trepidation...his feeling of foreboding as to how his life is gonna change after the birthday ball, but hasn't it changed already, because of the slap? Maybe they need to get caught out in the rain more often. Maybe that will soften Yuuri's heart towards him... or will he just be doomed...stuck in a onesided relationship... suffering with a bad case of unrequited love...because he fell for Yuuri... hard!
All in all I find I like the characters and the story...but I hate that damn pink gown! It makes him all frilly and girly and I don't think it helps his cause... but...he is cute and has a great personality...and that character may hopefully help him win the day...or not! well... here's to you Wolfram...at least he thought well enough of you to bandage your hand...Lot's of TLC there!~_^!
schedule
August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I got your email awhile back. I beta'd the chapter like you asked and sent it back to you. I didn't know you didn't get it. Sorry about that. I would have redone it and sent it again if I had known.
schedule
August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is quite an interesting plot. But, it needs some good ole lemons....and soon!!
schedule
August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more soon please. :)
schedule
August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well you've done it...again! gotten me interested in a fic.
it's strange... i have never heard of this anime until now and whoa! i am hooked! can't get enough of it!
you really make the reader care about the characters. they are neither flat nor one dimensional.
thank you so very much. i now have a new fic to read, a new set of characters to care about and a new universe to enjoy. ~_^!
it's strange... i have never heard of this anime until now and whoa! i am hooked! can't get enough of it!
you really make the reader care about the characters. they are neither flat nor one dimensional.
thank you so very much. i now have a new fic to read, a new set of characters to care about and a new universe to enjoy. ~_^!
schedule
August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love that chapter just like the first one. Really - I just love yuuram ^-^
And Yuuri trying to make a face like Gwendal - i really can imagine that - it's just too funny.
But the best thing was the kiss - so sweet. I just love both of them.
Btw, what's your first language? And how did you get to speak such a good English? Honestly, I'm getting envious.
greetings, leia
And Yuuri trying to make a face like Gwendal - i really can imagine that - it's just too funny.
But the best thing was the kiss - so sweet. I just love both of them.
Btw, what's your first language? And how did you get to speak such a good English? Honestly, I'm getting envious.
greetings, leia
schedule
August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far. It's good that you are giving Yuri the chance to work through all of his feelings. PLus, it's good that Wolfram is learning to back off just a bit and give Yuri some space. Your English is actually pretty good most of the time, but I'll beta read for you, if you would like. If you're interested, email me at rivendellwarrior@yahoo.com. Keep up the good work!