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August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Since I'm not a native speaker either I haven't noticed any weird expression or mistakes... So I'm gettin kind of jealous. Your writing is really good.
It's really nice that the story does not advance too fast. Most Yuuram stories are starting right away with those two going fluffy. Not that I would complain about it. But it is nice to read something different.
I really like to know how you will make Yuuri gay. So, hope you will write and upload the next chapter soon.
greetings, leia
ps: Conrad, Yozak and Adelbert... a threesome? (Well... there are things... uah... Conrad and Yozak - okay, but... Adelbert?!)
It's really nice that the story does not advance too fast. Most Yuuram stories are starting right away with those two going fluffy. Not that I would complain about it. But it is nice to read something different.
I really like to know how you will make Yuuri gay. So, hope you will write and upload the next chapter soon.
greetings, leia
ps: Conrad, Yozak and Adelbert... a threesome? (Well... there are things... uah... Conrad and Yozak - okay, but... Adelbert?!)
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August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I am the first to review! *feels honored* well, I liked this one. Very descriptive - and didn't just shoot into 'Yuri-realizes-he-loves-Wolf' technique. I grow tired of the same plot! lol... but hey, yours is great! And I hope you update soon! ^_^